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[sweet_like_choc]

Title: Some Sort of Ending
Author: sweet_like_choc
Characters: Lilly
Word count: 1824
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I will never, ever own them. Ever.
Summary: Lilly contemplates. No, really.
Spoilers: Season 1
Note: This is for 7sins_7virtues, my word was ‘wrath’. As you may be able to see, I didn’t take the obvious definition, as I had zero good ideas for that. I’m

Comments

[mishane]

Wow. This was really well written and I think perfectly in Lilly character. I especially LOVED the flashbacks. But most of all, perfect Lilly characterization. Great job!

[moonlightrick]

Loved this--so totally Lilly, so totally awesome (well, duh :p). I like that you balanced her characterization--that is, that you neither glossed, nor stuck only to her worst points :D

[insunshine]

This was good.

I got stuck with wrath too, and it's funny, I ended with the beginning of the scene that you started with. Only mine was in Aaron's perspective and not Lilly's.

But yeah, this was really good and I especially liked the end.

[lissa_maylee]

Wow! This was amazing! Great job with Lilly's voice, and a unique take on the subject.

[fickledame]

Wow, this was perfect! I love it a lot. Great work!