One More Time

[sweet_tearz01]

THis little story here is rated xxx so beware and is delightfully yaoi (guyxguy) its based on the gravitation characters Eiri and Shuichi ... so enjoy. Its called "one more time"

Comments

[tobira_door]

...*drool*

That was yummy. ^^ A bit longer would have been nice, but meh. I'll take yaoi as I can get it. I can't write lemons (no experience; I'ma still a virgin; makes it a bit hard -_-). Anyway, the only thing I can point out is that it should be a bit longer with some more description. Other than that, it was good. *drools some more* Nothing better than Gravitation yaoi ^^

I might recommend that you check out the boysfuckingboys lj community. I'm on the staff there and we need some fanfic writers. You'd make a lot of people happy, trust me ^^

--Tobira, signed and sealed

[sweet_tearz01]

Sounds delightful...thanks for the suggestions when i get time ill revise...but if u want more that i can definately give you..i have another gravitation yaoi fanfic called Make it Work...lemme kno if u wanna read it and ill hook u up!!!!!!!! ^_^ (ps- u dont need to have sex to write good lemon...alot of my sexual experience were awkward but thats why we have our imagination darling and that makes everything all better!!!!!!!!)...i dont kno bout joining the community tho...i want to but i cant promise that ill have a bunch of stories to post or if ill update in a timely fasion but one shot sex stories i can provide..im such a freak....lemme kno more bout the community and if theyll get mad at me if i dont keep my stories up..(i hate it when ppl yell at me...) okay!!!!!!!!!!

[sweet_tearz01]

..sigh..i joined the community...i guess ill post this fic there...