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Dec 30, 2007 12:56


The end of the touch
The touch came quietly
And I was sworn not to tell
his hands were so cold
I can’t forget his smell

I tried to get away 
But he held me with force
His breath smelt of booze
And his voice wispy and hoarse

I cried only at first
As hatred grew inside
I remembered one thing, KARMA
As he boasted with pride

It started at age 6
And it continued on
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golden_purple18 December 31 2007, 02:37:37 UTC
Hey, I just wanted to know if this really happened, cause I know you might just be writing about someone else's experience. I was abused, too. By my dad, and I told my stepmom twice. The first time she didn't do anything and the second she called me a liar. I recently told my mom, like, this summer, and now I live with her and am safe. It started at 6 for me too. I just want to tell you we can talk. I know you've heard it tons, but I thought it might be nice to talk to someone who went through the same things. I was suprised to hear about another person, so close. Not like the stories, or about family, but a friend. PM me if you want to talk in private, k?

Huggles,
Jessi

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sweetatheena December 31 2007, 02:42:49 UTC
I dont know how to PM??? HELP.....

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golden_purple18 January 1 2008, 05:06:21 UTC
okay, so the pm you sent me worked, but i can't pm you back cause you have your settings in your profile set so you don't get pms. if you want, you can just email me at lizzie-bette@hotmail.com, or you can try to change your settings. huggles and a happy new year!

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