Bruised Chapter 7

Aug 17, 2011 00:49

Title: Bruised
Pairing: Yoochun x Junsu, evil!Yunho x Jaejoong (slight)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: They will never be mine unless I manage to find a way to kidnap them and hide them in my closet 8D
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, violence, abuse

Summary: Junsu's life has been a mess since his parents divorced two ( Read more... )

chaptered: bruised, dbsk, genre: angst, rating: r, yunjae, genre: romance, genre: au, yoosu, genre: drama

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harunotenshi August 17 2011, 00:30:51 UTC
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

omgsun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!!!!

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!

why cut it off THERE? noooooo.... that bastard of a father! jnhajkghksahdgjsadgkhsakgdhsakhgdksadhgkladhgakh!!!!! what will happen to junsu now? will he be able to survive this? omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!

please... please... *begs&grovels* update as soon as you can.... TT________________________________________________TT

i really hope the authorities take that good for nothing bastard away... he doesn't deserve to be a father... TT____TT

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sweetballads August 18 2011, 13:32:40 UTC
LOL I'm sorry, I love to write cliffhangers. XD (though reading them is a whole different story)

And lool no need to beg and grovel for it XDDDD;; I'll try to update as soon as possible, haha! And the answers to your questions will be in the next update. >D

Thanks for reading! :D

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micky_susu August 17 2011, 00:38:44 UTC
I'm glad Changmin and Yoochun helped Junsu, but I hope Su finds somewhere to go to get away from his evil father before he kills him >.

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sweetballads August 19 2011, 19:38:54 UTC
Yes, I hope so too!

But it's always nice to know you have good friends backing you up <3

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karmentvxq August 17 2011, 01:02:04 UTC
This is the most anguish fic I've ever read. I'm so mad at everyone even Yoochun, how can you let Junsu go to his house again.
Please continue, I love the biiigggg ass chapter :)

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sweetballads August 19 2011, 19:45:22 UTC
Hahaha, mission completed! I actually love reading angsty fics & hurt/comfort fics so I'm glad that my own try at writing them is going good lol xD

And don't be mad at everyone. :c Junsu wanted to go back, he thought his father had changed (and to be honest, his father wanted to keep it up but his determination was crushed after he heard Yunho) and he knew he couldn't burden Yoochun too much.

But of course it turned out differently than he had thought.

Hehe, I wasn't expecting this chapter to turn out this big but there was just too much I wanted to put into one chapter. XD I really had some derp-moments though, since I'm not used to writing so much in one go (I don't know how other LJ writers can do that! Mad respect for them!). And first, I thought it'd be twice the size... but the chapter became longer and longer and longer and suddenly, it was three times the size of a normal chapter. XD

But I'm glad you liked it! <3

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ladygaffes August 17 2011, 01:08:23 UTC
Wae make me cry? Wae?!
Junsu's situation just pains me. I hope everything will be okay. Yoochun ah please do something. Chebal, Ne?!

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sweetballads August 19 2011, 19:47:01 UTC
I'm sorry to make you cry! ;_;

You'll see how everything will turn out! :>

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0101xiahtic August 17 2011, 01:13:02 UTC
You've got the whole cliff hanger thing perfected XDDD
And the Yoosu in this is all around wonderful,
the fact that Yunjae are assholes just kind of made me giggle though, and that Changmin beat the shit out of people is... extremely believable 8D

/grabby hands for next update o3o

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sweetballads August 19 2011, 19:50:12 UTC
Hahaha, thank you!! Cliffhangers are my best friends when I'm writing. (my worst enemy when I'm reading fics/watching dramas/whatever else XD)

Hihi, I'm glad you're enjoying the Yoosu, Yunjae and the fighter!Changmin LOL XDDD

I'll try to update as soon as possible <3

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