Fragile 5/5

[sweetballads]

Title: Fragile
Pairing: Changmin x Yoochun
Rating: R
Disclaimer: When I close my eyes, they are mine.
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, rape, incest, underage sex, twisted parentship.

Summary: 'I love you' soon becomes a meaningless phrase for Yoochun. His mother takes him more and more often to those strange

Comments

[harunotenshi]

are you planning an epilogue for all this? cause it is in DIRE NEED of one... else... alkfdhakdlfkhazsdklfhalkjfhakhdfklashdlfkahdlfkjah!!!!

i feel like this is just the end of the action and just the beginnings of a conclusion. this story needs to really have a happy ending... but that's just me... cause i feel that yoochun truly deserves to FINALLY be able to live a happy life.

[sweetballads]

Haha, yes! There'll be an epilogue :')

Yoochun definitely deserves a very very happy ending :'DD
Don't worry, I don't think the angst tag is needed anymore in the epilogue lol. I wouldn't have the heart to write something like 'OH JK THE LAWSUIT WAS JUST A DREAM EVERYTHING ACTUALLY WAS JUST A DREAM LOL K YOOCHUN DOESN'T HAVE CHANGMIN BY HIS SIDE AND HE STILL GETS RAPED VERY OFTEN KTHNBAI. :'D'

...but wouldn't that be an unexpected twist? :'D

I think I'd die many deaths if I'd do that, though. And I honestly don't have the heart to do it either XD

[harunotenshi]

well now~ that's good to know... i hope you post the epilogue NOW! LOL... soon~^^

[sweetballads]

Haha!
Oh you impatient~ :'D

I'll try to post it as soon as possible lol XD

[crimson_miharu]

I as so excited to see this updated. It's been a while and honestly I couldn't tell you if you missed anything since I only remember the overall gist of the story (sorry). I never expected for his mom to actually admit to her wrongs. I Thought she would go the route of Mr. Shim and lie her ass off. I had to laugh while reading this because Jaejoong did an EXCELLENT job as a lawyer by nailing Mr. Shim balls to the wall during his examination and the lovely Taeyeon put the final nail in his coffin with her tape but wait did I misread/understand something because I thought Changmin was gonna testify against his father too?

Loved this chapter because maybe now that everything is out in the open and they have for all purposes won their case, maybe now Chun can move on and begin to heal!

[sweetballads]

I'm glad you were excited lol :'D I kind of got stuck after the last chapter and then I got a slight writer's block as well but SUDDENLY, I SAW THE LIGHT :'D lol.
I don't expect you to remember everything lol since it's been two months or something since my last update. So that's okay :'D
Oh, I'm really glad you liked the cross-examination lol. I think my brain died a few times while writing it lol. It was my fail attempt in trying to mime Death Note and especially Phoenix Wright lol :'DD
And yeah, he testified. But I didn't write it lol. 'The rest of the lawsuit was only show, a procedure to hear everyone's voices,' was my implication of [put Changmin's testimony here] lmao, I see it's a little bit vague. XD;; He wouldn't have said anything we wouldn't have known though, he'd have described the evening Taeyeon had recorded (which is found in chapter 3).

I'm really glad you loved it! ♥

[championmugger]

Omg, the last chapter! :)

Jae is awesome as a lawyer, and its disgusting how Dongmin lied through his teeth. As well as how Yoochun's mum actually disregarded him when she went to warn them. Still, I never expected her to plead guilty; somehow it seems like she's just getting the easier way out for a lighter sentence because that is, after all, the fact. ): She obviously needs treatment.

And yay for Taeyeon! Seems like many TVXQ fics these days have Taeyeon as a cameo or side pairing (not that I minded!); the recording did the trick, but I really can't imagine how a young one would feel about hearing it all over again. :(

At least it's all over now, and I can't wait to see the epilogue! :D /gives cookies

[sweetballads]

I'm really glad you liked it :'D

Well, Dongmin obviously tried to save his own skin. And the reputation of his company lol.
Lmao XD Everyone in this fic needs treatment, quite honestly. XD Except for Jae because he's flawless like that :'DD

Really? I didn't know! I'm not really a SNSD fan though I like their music and I somehow managed to pick up their names lol but idk, when I described the maid a few chapters back, I just had Taeyeon in mind. :'D

Thanks! I'll try to post it soon :'D

[darkcupcakes]

I'm so happy that Yoochun's mother confessed to her crimes even though that can't undo the past. And that Dongmin, grrrrrr He better end up being the bitch of other prisoners when in jail. For a moment, I thought the story really was ending this abruptly and I went all 'but what about Min, and Jae and Chun in the future!!!' Thankfully, my short moment of panic ended with your announcement of an eventual epilogue. Yay!!! :D

[sweetballads]

(Sidenote: I always end up staring at your icon lol it's kind of disturbingly intriguing)

LOOOOL 'he'd better end up being the bitch of other prisoners when in jail' XD OMG, A++ lool. I hadn't even thought of that, ohmaaigod, the image is now stuck in my head DDD/ Dongmin being buttraped in jail roflmao. The irony lmao :'DD

Lol, scrap the eventual :'D I can't leave this story just like that D: There'll definitely be an epilogue, the question is just when I post it lol XD

[gompi]

waaaaaaaaaaaah ;3; i feel like you're teasing me with the ending

i'm so glad you got to finish it bb (: i'm really happy :3

[sweetballads]

I'm sorry! The ending definitely is a tease lol :'D
But I wrote it with the epilogue in my mind :'DD

I'm happy too! :33 I really wanted to finish it but I just wasn't able to. But then it all started rolling once again a few weeks ago :'D

(And you changed your name? ö)