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sweetcakes983

The Good Samaritan, Chapter 4

Feb 21, 2007 11:56

So, here is chapter 4! I actually wrote it this weekend but wasn’t fully satisfied with it. But, seeing all of the WONDERFUL support I’ve gotten in response to Chapter 3, I was fueled to finish this bad boy! Thank you, thank you, thank you for reading and reviewing! It really, really helps in motivation!

This chapter is somewhat emotionally ( Read more... )

izzie stevens, mark sloane, grey's anatomy

Comments 3

_chica02 February 21 2007, 19:43:05 UTC

Another amazing chapter, not surprisingly. ;) I love how Izzie's on Mark's mind right from the beginning of the day. I'm also glad that you didn't have Izzie forget the kiss or worse, be all jittery and nervous. Too cliche. And it seemed like an Izzie thing to be the one to bring it up--almost a defense mechanism, ya know what I'm saying? And the banter, oh the banter. *sigh* Love.

I think Izzie was being a little too hard on Addison though. Mark and Derek both did numbers on her, and Izzie wasn't exactly a perfect angel when she completely blew off Alex for Denny. BUT at the same time, I think it was a good thing for her to say, because it shows how much she really has come to care about Mark.

It was also nice to see the word "friend" surface in Mark's mind when thinking about Izzie, and that the words "with benefits" weren't tagging along. Heh.

Can't wait for more!

sweetcakes983 February 21 2007, 20:27:06 UTC

Thank you so much for the review!
One thing I love about Izzie is that she is honest to a fault and doesn't fly w/ B.S. I think that's why she and Mark work so well together in my mind.

And you are right, Izzie was a little too hard on Addison and truthfully, she doesn't know the whole story of the M/A/D/ triangle, and I think when the full truth comes out it's gonna be a major factor in their relationship/friendship. But yet, Addison wasn't the only victim in the triangle (all three were guilty) and Mark needs someone in his corner. . .and he needs to know that he has someone to fight for him.

And this relationship between the two of them is something that they can't explain. It's not even something I can define and I'm the writer! LOL.All I can say is that it's going to be interesting!

I am so happy that you are enjoying the story!

bluesunsets February 22 2007, 06:51:04 UTC

Last night I read this at ff.net, but I have yet to review there. I'm usually one of those people who can't re-read something I've already read after I've finished it. Even if it's a good story on the Internet, I just can't. I tend to skim over the words, but with this, I just had to re-read. Because, one, there isn't many Mark/Izzie fics out there as awesome & updated as this, & two, because this is now my guilty pleasure.

I totally *squee*'ed. Mark notices how she wears her hair! I know it's only small, but it's just so damn cute! Mark seems like the type of guy who wouldn't remember a THING about someone - let alone a female - but he does with Izzie! Aww. It makes my little Mizzie heart ache with happiness. :)

His lips spread into a Cheshire grin. He couldn't wait to torture her.

I love how you had Mark so MARK! He wasn't the typical nervous guy who would be debating internally whether or not he should approach the girl who laid one on him . . . I didn't expect this. Mark is getting evil ideas in that pretty, pretty, steam-a- ( ... )