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sweetcakes983

The Good Samaritan, Chapter 5

Feb 25, 2007 11:08

Here is chapter 5! A big, huge THANK YOU to all who have reviewed! You really inspire me to continue writing this story! Another huge ‘thank you’ goes to my dear friend, Andrea! You know how much you help me!

--SC

Chapter 5: Rap Music and Lucky T-Shirts

The door banged open, Izzie’s hands full of plastic bags that were in ( Read more... )

izzie, mark, grey's anatomy

Comments 6

_chica02 February 25 2007, 20:24:51 UTC

Yay, an update! Excellent chapter, although I didn't take you for the type of mean person that would leave me hanging like that! ;P ( ... )

iamz February 28 2007, 00:27:59 UTC

I'd read the first chapter and for some reason totally thought it was a one-shot but MAN am I so glad it isn't. Dead on characterization of Mark and yeah... I wish fic!Izzie was like real!Izzie as well hahaha Anyways uber good and you shoudl totaly keep on going :)

loquitaqbanita February 28 2007, 00:47:16 UTC

I first started reading this on ff.net but I don't know how to leave feedback on there so I'm glad you friended me and I found you through here.

This is such a great story. I was iffy about this couple at first but honestly reading your fic has made me love them together. I really hope they get together in GA soon.

I laughed out loud during most of this chapter except of course at the end. Which is very mean. How can you leave us like that? I agree with jamz your characterization of Mark is dead on. He's so funny in his way and most of the things he said in this chapter I can so picture him saying.

But I hate to break it to Izzie in Baseball New York always wins. The Mariners are terrible but the Yankees are great! :)

bluesunsets February 28 2007, 07:36:32 UTC

It's amazing how you can provide us with a normal situation and throw these two hotties in, yet still keep them in character. This chapter was amazing. There's so much yumminess that it leaves me speechless.

You totally surprised me with Mark's taste in rap. And I love competitive!Izzie. Mark losing the bet was cute, too. His ego didn't even seem to deflate too much. I'm very happy Mark asked Izzie to go out to the game. And Izzie saying it was not a date was totally Izzie. And I remember Hank! Vaguely, though.

MARK HAD A MAN CRUSH! Wow. Seriously. That is beyond awesome.

The ending screams: "Total cliffhanger." I love how you changed it from an easy-going atmosphere to a tense and serious one. I just hope the baby and Mark are okay. No exploding cars, please! XP

Once again, you've surprised and amazed me with this chapter! :)

(Sorry it's not as long as the others. ;/)

♥

luminescing March 5 2007, 23:12:41 UTC

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!