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sweetcakes983

The Good Samaritan

Feb 04, 2007 01:39

Here is a plot bunny come to fruition. It's a long one-shot. It's the first GA fic I've ever written. I am definitely not the best writer out there and I would GREATLY appreciate all opinions (the good and the bad!) I'm the only one who has edited it...so, sorry for any mistakes ( Read more... )

izzie, mizzie, mark, izzie stevens, mark sloane, grey's anatomy

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nvrpromise February 4 2007, 02:22:10 UTC

I really enjoyed this one. :D The only issue I have with it however (sorry!) is that Izzie's eyes are brown and not blue. ;d

sweetcakes983 February 4 2007, 02:55:56 UTC

Doh! I can't believe I didn't realize that her eyes are brown. Thanks for pointing it out to me. I changed it and even did a little editing. Thanks again!

nvrpromise February 4 2007, 02:58:48 UTC

Haha, it's okay. A lot of people make that mistake for some reason. ;D

cute_poison24 February 4 2007, 02:31:52 UTC

Wow. I love this. Great job!

sweetcakes983 February 4 2007, 02:56:20 UTC

Why thank you!!!

_chica02 February 4 2007, 03:01:00 UTC

I felt like I was the only one who'd written Mark/Izzie so I was so glad to see this! I really liked it--I love fic writers that write Mark with a little bit of a sensitive side while still being Mark. And you made some astute observations about Izzie as well. Great job!

sweetcakes983 February 4 2007, 03:14:06 UTC

Thank you so much! Yeah, Mark can be quite the ass. I feel like the writers are writing him like Karev in the first season and he's just one big onion waiting to have all of his different layers peeled away. I also am wondering if the writers will go there w/ Izzie and her reactions to the newly wedded/engaged couples...I think I would be incredibly heartbroken and jealous if my fiance just died. We'll have to see!

_chica02 February 4 2007, 03:34:35 UTC

Nice metaphor with the onion! I totally agree. And I friended you back. :)