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sweetdreams_25

Silent Whispers Part One

Jan 16, 2011 17:18

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xoxo_qui January 17 2011, 06:56:46 UTC

Oh wow! I am VERY interested in seeing where this goes!

I can't imagine losing my best friend and watching her death be swept under the rug! I wonder what really happened and hope Embry won't find herself in danger in her quest to find the truth!

sweetdreams_25 January 17 2011, 18:19:04 UTC

Thanks for reading!!! While I was writing this it was making me so sad because I wanted her best friend to be alive too. lol
I can say this...Embry is about to embark on a journey that she's never gonna forget.

xoxk9 January 21 2011, 14:53:36 UTC

Nice start!!! I can tell this will be good. Keep it up, I can't wait to see where this goes.

sweetdreams_25 January 28 2011, 22:44:54 UTC

Thank you for the comment! :D I'm really excited about this story myself! Re-writing it has been on my mind forever! Hopefully I wont let you down :)

valpre March 9 2011, 15:57:22 UTC

Wow, poor Embry. I can't imagine losing anyone close to me and then have the people around you try to convince you, you are imagining things. That would be enough to drive me insane. I'm glad to see she isn't the only one though entertaining "conspiracy theories" as her mother put it.

Stunning shots. The colors just jumped right out at me.

Addicted daijahv March 10 2011, 00:05:16 UTC

OMG Wow! Very intriguing start! It kinda makes me mad that her mother and BF are trying to brush her off about her thoughts. I mean I can kind of understand their positions. Her best friend has just died and they want to help her through the pain quickly and of course denial being one of the stages of grief, she is really holding on to painful memories and Evan and her Mom want her to let it go.

But on the other hand, she knows this girl like a sister and KNOWS something isn't right about what happened. The VERY least both Mom and Evan can do is hear her out and at least consider her thoughts may not be purely from a state of grief.

I love Tyler being able to confirm her suspicions! I cannot wait to see where this goes! Awesome mystery setup and HERE I SIT GLUED waiting for more!