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dragonzair March 8 2011, 06:00:58 UTC
esfglk;adfg I saw/read this on Tumblr and it's giving me mini-nightmares.

Really well-written!

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sweetiegrrl2346 March 8 2011, 06:19:24 UTC
Sorry about the nightmares, lol!

I honestly have no idea where this came from. When I was writing it, I was thinking it was a story about survival, but the more I read it over the more ways I interpreted it. For awhile, it reminded me of Katniss from Hunger Games, and then after you said about nightmares I started thinking of her as some ghost that won't cross over, lol.

In other words, I guess it's totally up to interpretation. Or it's just a messed-up product of my weird imagination. ^_^

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lacrimadraconis March 8 2011, 22:38:56 UTC
I loved the flow of this, a mix of darkness and light in words. Well done!

It reminded me of the feel I had while reading The Hunger Games. You captured a similar mood here.

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sweetiegrrl2346 March 11 2011, 06:29:41 UTC
Thank you very much! I think Hunger Games was definitely influencing me as I wrote this. I love Katniss so much, her strength and resilience and determination to never quit. I'm glad you liked it!

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