Comments | sweetmoons: My first posted One Piece fic.

sweetmoons

My first posted One Piece fic.

Oct 08, 2006 17:04

Title: Second Bests
Rating: M
Word Count: 274
Pairing: LuSan YOU HEARD ME! Though with heavy mentions of Everyone!butChopper/Everyone!butChopper
Topic: Second Best
A/N: If you like this please comment and I might just work up the courage to post my other stuff… what? There is nothing wrong with getting on my knees when I say that…

Disclaimer: Oh how I ( Read more... )

Comments 13

tizigirl October 8 2006, 21:43:40 UTC

this is great and funny. ^__^
*gives you cookies for writing this*

(and I don't really have time to read/write this, because I have to think of a way of overcoming my shyness and seduce a boy who I have made shy... /personal)

sweetmoons October 8 2006, 21:57:58 UTC

*eats cookie* You should give him a cookie too, I bet he'd like that.

tizigirl October 8 2006, 22:19:46 UTC

I know something I want to do, but he is in my housemate's room, which makes it problematic... He's playing a game (either on the internet or a cardgame) in my housemate's room and the door is closed, so I can't even wander in... maybe I should offer them cookies thanks for the advice ^__^

ptps October 8 2006, 23:45:34 UTC

The last line is golden. XD

AND LUFFY CAN'T BE BOTTOM!!1 HE HAS TO TOP BECAUSE HE'S THE CAPTAIN. ;_____________;

....top from the bottom, mayb - *shot for lame and overused joke*

sweetmoons October 9 2006, 00:29:13 UTC

I have a week spot for LuSan XD There is not nearly enough of it and I plan to write a lot.

BTW I really love your work and just cause its you... I'll tell you a secret...
>.>
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I'm writing a One Piece MPREG... Shhhh don't tell anyone...
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>.>

ptps October 9 2006, 01:13:46 UTC

.................how long have you actually 'known' me to actually know I sort-of like that XD;; *doesn't remember posting anything about said issue except maybe almost 7 months ago*

sweetmoons October 9 2006, 02:33:54 UTC

Well I went digging through your journal like a week ago so its all fresh to me XD Is that weird? :X
ILOVEYOUTHISMUCH!!! <*^o^*>

BTW if you got this message twice or something ignore the first... I can never tell if the internet is actually working or not... XD;;;

chibimono October 9 2006, 00:31:11 UTC

I have so much love for this. I can't explain... Just... So. Much. Love. ♥

sweetmoons October 9 2006, 02:31:20 UTC

Awwe much love back :D

yuki_kokoro October 9 2006, 04:32:50 UTC

XDDD

"Things settled down again and Sanji commented that though he’d never realized it, to him Luffy was the best at both. Luffy returned the complement with much enthusiasm and promptly pounced on the blond."

That's adorably sexy. ^^ And the whole premise of the crew having a "best top" and "best bottom" rating argument is golden. Thank you so much for giving Sanji his proper credit by having him win "best top" hands down. It's so true and it so often gets overlooked because of his bottom skills. I mean... come on... with his legs he'd be a FANTASTIC top. Lastly, the reminder of "that one time" made me grin. ^^

sweetmoons October 9 2006, 05:10:23 UTC

Tee hee XD! Much thanks and I totally agree. While I am a total sucker for uke!Sanji, there is no way anyone would be able to beat that hip control and leg power... not to mention he'd be a total gentlemen as a top and do whatever pleased you... unless you were Zoro... with which I'd imagine he'd put up a fight and first say, "I'll do what I please with you bitch!" And then do what Zoro liked without actually looking like he was... XD;;

yuki_kokoro October 9 2006, 05:16:45 UTC

Powerful AND considerate, an excellent point. *adds to the list of reasons Sanji makes a great top*

That definitely needs to enter the fandom. Many times I've seen something along the lines of Sanji keeping track of what Zoro likes to eat or making his favorites without being obvious about it and now I demand implications that Sanji keeps track of favorite positions and sexual whatevers without seeming to. Because that's all kinds of hot.

sweetmoons October 9 2006, 05:34:57 UTC

Oi! Bastard that doesn't make me happy at all! ie. OMG I love you!
To tell you the truth this is my 3rd OP fic and everytime I write Sanji I think back to that special chapter in the manga in which Sanji is talking to that horse that they want to eat... "I will love you first and then eat you." and then Zoro is like, "The more he talks the crazier he sounds." I love weird!courteous!Sanji, there needs to be more of him in the fandom as well! :D