you can't reverse the bullet from a gun. part 2

[sweetshisus]

Comments

[momomoing]

Oh wow...this is progressing a lot faster than I thought it would! I was surprised by Yixing's forwardness...it will interesting to see how their relationship develops !

Thank you for a fun chapter (and so quick, too!)!

[sweetshisus]

haha, yeah~ I was trying to show Kris's reluctance to engage with Yixing though he is initially really attracted to him bc of his mission and bc of his own inability to connect with people bc of his childhood, but YIxing's much more forward about what he wants and how he wants it. or at least that's how I'm writing him.

ty for commenting so quickly too ;; I just feel very inspired as of late~

[sweetshisus]

part three is up! http://sweetshisus.livejournal.com/147052.html

[pseudo_shigure]

I like it that Yixing's character is confident and almost mischevious instead not timid and weak and predictable. And Kris could feel "gooey" and not completely robotic.
Keep up your good job :)

[sweetshisus]

yeah, exactly haha~ I feel like the canon ways to write Kris and Yixing have been exhausted in every possible fic so far, so I'm trying to go for a more nuanced approach to the characters. thank you for commenting!! :)

[sweetshisus]

part three is up! http://sweetshisus.livejournal.com/147052.html

[pseudo_shigure]

OMG. another update! Thanks for letting me know.
And the sudden influx of fanxing fics today is uh-mazing!!

[xx_pockii]

KRISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I CAN'T.
OH MY GOD
KRIS, THIS FIC JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER.
UGH.

I FEEL SO SPECIAL HAVING YOU WRITE THIS FOR ME ; ~~~ ;
UGH.
UGHHHHHH.
FML.
I LOVE HOW YIXING IS AND HOW KRIS IS IN THIS FIC.

MUCH MORE DIFFERENT THAN THE OTHERS AND JFC.
JUST READING KRIS FREAKING OUT ABOUT HOW PREFECT YIXING IS MADE ME A SQUEALING MESS.
SOBBING
DFHSDKLFHSDKLFHDKLFHSDLKHFLDKFHDFH

JFC,
AND THEN
THEN, THE END.
OH DEAR LORD, BLESS MY SOIL BECAUSE I FUCKING CAN'T.
SOBBING.
WEEPING
CRYING..

I FUCKING LOVE YOU KRIS ; A ; THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL UPDATE <3

[sweetshisus]

your all-caps comments are the best. KEEP 'EM COMING.

omg but you ARE special soooo ofc! I mean, if you hadn't mentioned it, I wouldn't have written it, so thank you for bringing me the inspiration.

hehehehe~ yes I tried my best to go for a non-canonical interpretation of the characters, just because it's so much more fun tbh.

omg bless ur soil I'm dying ;~; don't weep or cry or sob ;~;

ywywywywyw :D more to come!

[sweetshisus]

(I DMed you but...)

part three is up! http://sweetshisus.livejournal.com/147052.html

[rainbowfwish]

bless you for such a speedy update UHUHUHU i am sobbing unattractively even as i read this chapter through and OMG i knew it yixing is wickedly alluring no matter what he's doing.
THANK YOU LOVELY!

[sweetshisus]

omg thank YOU for this comment ;~; I'm having so much fun writing this tbh and ty for the continuing support!

[sweetshisus]

part three is up! http://sweetshisus.livejournal.com/147052.html

[sweetshisus]

haha I'm glad you enjoy it! ty for the support ~

[sweetshisus]

part three is up! http://sweetshisus.livejournal.com/147052.html