clarity - part three.

[sweetshisus]

Comments

[yixing]

JFC KRIS. this was so angry and wretched and raw and full of emotion AND MORE THAN I EVER WANTED???? sobs im just in awe because the first few lines of prose were so expertly crafted and so beautiful.

head shots worth 10 points and gut shots worth 30, except no one was playing the game to win because no one was playing the game at all. can i just engrave this into my heart or smth ksdhfjdskladsfhadlfja/

and stoner luhan omfg HOW DID YOU KNOW.

and i think what i loved about this is that there isn't a definite resolution, i mean luhan and yixing are still so amazingly fucked up and it's sort of beautiful and ugly all the same. they're drunk and high, they hate themselves, they hate each other and they're horny as fuck and somehow they're deluded enough to think that everything is all right. at least this is what i got from it ;__;

so amazing kris, thank you ♥

[sweetshisus]

sobs all over u and then rolls onto u ;~~~~~~;

you're like my #1 fan and I appreciate it so much esp for giving me incredible prompts that are fun to write and intense and just gr8 in general so ily<3

[dhachu]

I was brought along the story. The near-break-up scene, anger and jealousy. Ugh awesome ♥

[sweetshisus]

tyvm!! :)

[charliebnim]

UGH! OTL! I LOVED IT. fuck... this was somehow something amazing and uau, just uau

[sweetshisus]

thanks so much! :)