Vanna, you're basivally the only friend I have left of LJ answer soon!!

[sweetshorty234]

this is a letter to my friend Jon that I am really into, and i'm not sure if I should send this email this weekend or not, let me know please. I could use some feedback

Comments

[vannadear]

Aww Ash it's great! Very heartfelt and concise, there's no way to misinterpret it. You *have* to send it chica seriously!

I would suggest breaking it into paragraphs though, as when you first look at the amount written it seems a bit overwhelming and you definitely wouldn't want him to be nervous about reading it.