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ebonypsyche December 11 2006, 17:34:20 UTC
*sigh* I'm supposed to be writing a four page paper and 4 one page papers right now and I stop to read your fanfic.

Yay! This was really good.

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sweetumms33 December 11 2006, 21:35:12 UTC
Yeah! Someone else addicted to LJ and fan fic as me!!! Thanks for reading.

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starxd_sparrow December 11 2006, 18:26:11 UTC
*sigh*

You wrote that so well, the anger... there are practically sparks flying between them! I just love when Logan picks on Piz... Logan must know that Brigadoon isn't even in the same verbal sparring weight class as he is, and that it's practically one-sided... but, it never fails to make me laugh!

And I just love this, even if it is juvenile:
“Places to go, Logan,” she snaps coolly, pushing him away.
“People to do?”

At least when Logan and Veronica are apart, they can snark which is as close to on-screen sex as we can see on the CW *grin*

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sweetumms33 December 11 2006, 21:34:25 UTC
I'm so frustrated with the whole thing right now. I'd rather them be with other people, and the amazing snark to come back. I want normal funny sexy evil Logan back, not the softy who is with Veronica right now.

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bminor_or_a December 12 2006, 13:48:44 UTC
Oh please, you will totally get into grad school, so enough of that talk ( ... )

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sweetumms33 December 12 2006, 21:51:24 UTC
Took my first exam, so fingers crossed!!!

Thanks so much, I love when you give me feedback! Yeah this was through Veronica's POV, but I wanted to show how her anger lets her justify things, and we the viewer are supposed to just go along with it. I'm such a Logan fan-girl, but RT has to recognize that Veronica hasn't been that relatable lately. And this is what is going to happen, and we're supposed to get excited over the snark (which I will be) but be content with her being with someone simple and not moody. Because really, Veronica exhibits all of those qualities...NOT.

Did you read the new KB interview? I tell myself I won't and then I do, and then I want to throw things. Because RT made us like Piz, but really as a romantic figure? Maybe for Parker...not so much Veronica, as much as they try to play that one up.

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bminor_or_a December 13 2006, 02:37:54 UTC
Yeah I did read it. It was actually the first KB interview in a long time that hasn't made me yell at her or throw stuff. She made some little dig at Logan as usual, basically calling him emo, but I've come to expect stuff like that from her and the rest of the time she was pretty non-foot-in-mouthy. I know, I HATE all the "ooooh, is there something between her and Piz!?" stuff that they're always throwing out there, because there SO WOULD NOT BE. And the only thing that will happen if they put him with Veronica is that I will no longer find his dorkiness and incoherent babbling slightly endearing, I'll just find it ridiculous because there is no way in hell Veronica would put up with someone like that, let alone choose to spend time around them. If I'm rolling my eyes at someone, you KNOW Veronica would be rolling her eyes at them ( ... )

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sweetumms33 December 13 2006, 16:14:28 UTC
I could see the Mac/Piz but I am such a Dick/Mac obsesser that it would bother me. Even if it would be a cold day in hell before RT did that. It is really frustrating, I may stop obsessing over the show, and just go back to obsessing over fan fic

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polarthestral December 13 2006, 03:53:29 UTC
“Pizzy?”

LMAO!! Seriously . . . I can see Jason Dohring delivering that line and it shouldn't be so funny but I almost fell off my seat. Here Pizzy-Pizzy, who's a good dog? Yes you are! *roughs hair* Hee.

Points
Logan = 1,000
Veronica = 20

I declare him the winner of that round by a landslide.

I don't really expect to see it happen like this because Logan is a masochist and he'd probably let Veronica kick him for sleeping with Madison while they were broken up. Because he thinks so highly of her and so lowly of himself. 'Tis kind of sad. Because everything you had him say here is true. And I'd love to see him bring the hate-snark back and call Veronica on her shit with this kind of brutality. Since the soft approach didn't really work.

She absolutely has double standards - judges Logan like she'd never judge herself. And I love how you had her ignore everything he brought up about the past (especially re: getting with Duncan two weeks after dumping him at his lowest point) because that's so in character. Veronica is so ( ... )

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sweetumms33 December 13 2006, 16:11:39 UTC
I'm like a fic maniac right now, can't stop writing them. Yeah you're right, Logan does hold Veronica's worth much higher than his own,and its so painful to see. I really wish this would happen, that he'd grow a spine, and go back to being that guy who just didn't care about anyone. He's let her in, she's beaten him down, its time to go back to being an OPJ. The thing is, everything I wrote here about Veronica's thoughts are exactly what RT does to her. And we, as the viewer, are supposed to ride with that, even if we don't agree with anything she is saying. He doesn't do anything bad enough anymore for us to agree with her BS.

LMAO!! Seriously . . . I can see Jason Dohring delivering that line and it shouldn't be so funny but I almost fell off my seat. Here Pizzy-Pizzy, who's a good dog? Yes you are! *roughs hair* Hee.I KNOW. JD would kill that line, I can see the joy in his face when he lands it. I like Piz, I really do, but if they try to make him the nice "normal" boyfriend, I'm going to get annoyed. Wasn't the PURPOSE of S2 to ( ... )

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