Beginng/Middle/End

[sweetumms33]

Beginning

It started with that dirt on his nose. His mother had rubbed and rubbed, but there it was. Almost like the scar on his new friend’s face, an indicator of who he was, the poor son of a poor family. But she noticed him, despite sitting in a compartment with the most famous boy wizard. He noticed her bushy hair, and her two front teeth.

Comments

[starxd_sparrow]

Oh! Lovely!! Telling their love story via their Big Physical Traits... very, very sweet!

I especially loved: the poor son of a poor family and at school it’s a blinking sign, screaming Weasley. On Ginny it was pretty, on Fred and George slightly rakish, but on him, it hung in his face.. Awesome bits.

[sweetumms33]

I'm grinning rather stupidly, thanks! I actually wrote this for a quidditch challenge at h_e then realized I wasn't on a team and blushed furiously. But it is out in the world!