please give me you opinion

Feb 14, 2005 22:07

He can make me happy
he can make me cry
he can bring the light in my darkness eye
He can kiss my fears away
he is the one comfort i have....
and yet
he makes sollum tears fall freely from my face
what he can do
he will never do
he will leave my tear streaked face without word
he will never come to me
...because he never has

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jakotsu_sama February 14 2005, 19:31:34 UTC
*solemn

not sollum

^__^ Sorry if it's nit picky. But I'm in a Creative Writing class so it's only natural I would be.

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hey sweetums83901 February 15 2005, 14:37:55 UTC
im glad to have my mistakes corected

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chocolatexpunk March 7 2005, 16:45:51 UTC
awwwwwwwww thats sad

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