Decompression by anuna_81

Jul 28, 2009 04:30

Title: Decompression
Author: anuna_81
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: none, set during S1
Disclaimer: I don't own SGA.
Beta reading: wanderingsmith did the initial beta reading, and the_scary_kitty helped me shape it up and tamed my grammar. fex_84 helped a lot, she is the best when it comes to fic and character discussions. Thank you ladies, you are awesomeness personified ( Read more... )

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cassievalentine July 27 2009, 21:57:50 UTC
Yum. Sex and plot. I'm glad they worked everything out!

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anuna_81 August 4 2009, 04:46:03 UTC
Surprisingly it's not just sex, lol! I'm gčlad you liked it, thank you!

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yaboiksar July 27 2009, 23:59:06 UTC
Guh. The hotness, it burns!

That sex scene, whew boy. Steamy! And the communication, awesome. I love how you can have John be very *male* and it doesn't take away from Liz's strength. If that makes any sense at all.

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anuna_81 August 4 2009, 04:47:37 UTC
Thank you! I love that aspect of John and the fact that he doesn't feel intimidated by her strength. there are other things that frighten him more. So yeah, it makes lot of sense.

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mylittleredgirl July 28 2009, 02:54:07 UTC
ZOMG. ZOMG. You are such a good writer. And this, this is different than your usual style, more prose and less poetry, and it is awesome. The intensity is crazy, even in the less-intense moments, and it just made me want to squeee except I was so caught up in it I couldn't make noise! I think I just completely lost like twenty minutes reading that.

Seriously. You KNOW my weakness for episode-related fic, and actually, this might be the best one yet. FOR REALS. Also, the Not Dating! Geez, you totally wrote this FOR ME and didn't even realize it.

(Maybe we are just the sort who writes things for each other even when we don't mean to? Because I totally have hand-touching, if not hand-holding, in mine.)

HOLY CRAP BEST FIC EVER. I WILL NEED TO READ THIS TWELVE TIMES.

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mylittleredgirl July 28 2009, 02:57:30 UTC
... I just wrote that comment as if you were anr. So ignore the thing about the hand-touching and hand-holding, and me being confused that it doesn't sound like anr, you know, because it isn't. But that is all just me being a SPAZ because the fic is ACTUALLY SO GOOD THAT I TOTALLY LOST TRACK OF REALITY.

Yes. Actually THE BEST THING EVER, it can even overcome me being HORRIBLY ASHAAAAMED that I apparently forgot the headers as soon as I read them.

OMG. I WOULD NOW LIKE TO READ EVERYTHING YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN, PLZ.

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anuna_81 August 4 2009, 05:22:02 UTC
No problems! Mistakes happen :) I feel very flattered you think this is a good fic, because I enjoy your work - a lot! :) Don't feel ashamed - I was actually wondering if something like this would happen, because I had the fic ready in time, but I was away from home and Internet. anr was so kind to post the fic for me.

Finding my fic is relatively easy, there are links and tags on my journal you can use, or if you want me, I can give you a link where you can find them in one place.

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rushingwind July 28 2009, 03:59:31 UTC
Wow. Anuna, this is awesome. I don't usually care for Hot Zone-related fic, but this is amazing! Poor John, he doesn't want to be helpless.

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anuna_81 August 4 2009, 04:55:49 UTC
Heh, this is the fic I always wanted to see written by someone who's better than me, but it didn't happen, not quite like this. When I saw the prompt, I thought, what you want, you must do yourself. I love "Hot Zone" and I was always intrigued with that ep. I guess I did a good job here :) *glees* Thank you!

And, oh John. Of all the things, helpless is just the one that happens to him eventually. *sniff*

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ankareeda July 28 2009, 14:06:14 UTC
I'm speechless! *woah* You're so creative, your writing style is epic and this is just terrific, hon! *squee*

“I do trust you, Elizabeth... I just.... don't like being helpless.”

Awwww! ♥

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anuna_81 August 4 2009, 04:56:49 UTC
*squees back* Thank you so much! I don't know about my style, since that's changing ALL the time (since I'm still looking for it), but I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you!

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