iTHWK

Nov 03, 2008 14:43


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the world was wIthIn

what means sImple In the ways are men

once the door was open
the enterIng was simple
I had been afraid of the creakIng
gIvIng me away
but any occupants were asleep
or otherwIse unaware

the hallway is dIm
Its air tastes of apprehensIon
rushes up to meet me
lIke the last tIme I saw you
danger lIkely behInd every portal passed
until I ( Read more... )

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swgaines November 3 2008, 21:29:04 UTC
sweet! thanks.

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swgaines November 3 2008, 21:48:15 UTC
oh, and what did it taste like?

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childofmetis November 3 2008, 21:16:15 UTC
see your slow breathIng change on wakIng
and one hand reach out

I just got chills :)

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roguebaby November 3 2008, 22:25:00 UTC
very nice.

you know. i still have the poems you wrote me, written in purple pen, they are over 20 years old. how's THAT to make us feel old? ;p

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swgaines November 3 2008, 22:57:22 UTC
i still HAVE some of them, in some form or another, old and obsessive too boot. and you're older than me still, so shut up you

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roguebaby November 4 2008, 01:37:25 UTC
old old old old old.

:D

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swgaines November 4 2008, 02:26:23 UTC
fuck you

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swgaines March 18 2009, 13:06:40 UTC
suddenly very good. howz are the heatherz?

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swgaines March 18 2009, 17:21:50 UTC
alas i am not. are thou lovely self?

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