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Never Had Experienced This Bliss

Jul 31, 2005 00:24

Never Had Experienced This Bliss

Author : darkestvoices - darkestvoices@livejournal.com
Pairing : Aaron Peirsol & Ian Crocker
Rating : R
Disclaimer : Real people, not so real events, please don't sue me - I'm poor.
Notes : Written for vitawash24 who wanted angst and a first time fic. I hope you like it. I also had to include humidity and iced tea.
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darkestvoices July 31 2005, 07:07:56 UTC

Yeah, even though the last line's a bit corny, I couldn't resist not putting it in.
And thank you.

lacyforthorpey July 30 2005, 23:01:57 UTC

Oh my....so beautiful!

Thank you so much for this...it really touched me. I think everyone needs to read those verses.

darkestvoices July 31 2005, 07:06:47 UTC

Thank you.
And you're welcome. I'm glad it had an impact on you.

spherissa July 31 2005, 03:38:03 UTC

i liked this.. and i think the verses you chose are lovelily apt for Crocker's position... thank you

darkestvoices July 31 2005, 07:05:29 UTC

Thank you. But all the credit goes to Ashie for the verses.

vitawash24 July 31 2005, 09:35:23 UTC

Beautiful. Is it weird that I get all fluttery-hearted over people in spiritual crisis? Yes, I guess it is. But anyway...I like Ian finding comfort in something that had, I guess, repressed him for so long. It's very touching and I can feel him becoming whole. Thank you!

darkestvoices July 31 2005, 10:44:44 UTC

It was my pleasure.
And no, I don't think it's weird. Not an everyday occurence, but definately not weird.