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Jul 31, 2005 19:24

Title: Five Expressions with no Explanations
Author: alldoubtaboutit
Pairing: Ian/Pieter, with Grant/Michael on the side
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: All fictional.
Requirements: Pretty much anything, except for kink like blood play, water sports, or scat; dark or depressing storyline.
Prompts: Cricket and iced water, which doesn't feature much, actually ( Read more... )

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alldoubtaboutit July 31 2005, 05:01:14 UTC

Haha, that's really fast. Thanks for reading!

writan_bur July 31 2005, 05:19:38 UTC

ohhh that was lovely!

Great job!

alldoubtaboutit July 31 2005, 05:47:00 UTC

Oh, haha, thanks! :D And I heard from spherissa that you're interested in cricket? (Haha, I don't understand it at all, and I don't think you should try unless you want to be sleepless for this entire week or something.) I know there are a lot of breaks though! *dies*

writan_bur July 31 2005, 05:52:21 UTC

lol cricket is all Impy's fault, she dragged me into it, but I actually have begun to understand it! And it's during daytime for me, so no sleeplessness for me! ;-)

darkestvoices July 31 2005, 07:04:22 UTC

It was cute. Loved how it was all from Grant's POV. I love him so. There needs to be more Grant!love.

alldoubtaboutit August 1 2005, 05:27:30 UTC

Hee, thanks!

vitawash24 July 31 2005, 09:25:44 UTC

*giggle* This was so very sweet. Poor Grant! He's very easily distractable, isn't he? Hee. I really liked it, and I hope he and Mikey are very happy together. ;)

alldoubtaboutit August 1 2005, 05:28:23 UTC

Thank you. Yes I bet they are having hot sexorz with each other right now, even though I read in the papers today that Michael wasn't happy with his FINA performance.

penm July 31 2005, 18:15:55 UTC

Pieter claimed that he knew what cricket was all about, after reading up on it in Wikipedia.

Sometimes I think of myself on an expert on some subjects... because of Wikipedia. Bless Wikipedia.

Grant told Pieter that it might be more effective if Pieter actually killed the flies. Pieter pranced over and smacked him on the head, under the claim that he was swatting a fly. Some of the iced water he was sipping spilled down the front of his shirt, so Grant pretended to be angry, but Pieter saw through it.

I like the 'friendship' undertone here. S'nice.

Grant didn't know how he could consider throwing rubbish away a euphemism for anything anyway, because it really was a very, very bad euphemism.

Hee Grant.

so it wasn't some weird rash decision thing whereby Ian would get married to Pieter and move to the Netherlands and leave Grant all alone to swim for Australia.

HEE, GRANT. <3. I love the Grant/Ian friendship here too, where Grant is all worried he's going to be 'all alone to swim for Australia', the suggestion that Grant sort ( ... )

alldoubtaboutit August 1 2005, 05:29:46 UTC

Yes, me too. Hail Wiki! :D

Glad that you like this! :D

And uh, I don't know anything about cricket either, which is evident in how I made no specific mention of the terms and all. Haha.