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Fic: "Pool Water, Or How To Win Boys With Pudding"

Jul 31, 2005 12:45

Title: "Pool Water, Or How To Win Boys With Pudding"
Author: Ashleigh
Category: Swimslash - humor
Pairing: Grant Hackett/Michael Phelps
Rating: PG-13, bordering on R
Disclaimer/Author's Notes: The people are real, the characterizations aren't - no harm, no profit. This is my swim_ficathon story for thorne_scratch, to whom I profoundly apologize to for what you're about to ( Read more... )

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vitawash24 July 31 2005, 11:22:49 UTC

Hee hee! It's still incredibly snarky and fun...only BETTER. Plus it's just the right amount of sexy, too, which is always a plus. Love it!

(er, PS, you somehow ended up with two absolutely's in that one sentence. Darned Word.)

ex_sodiumlig110 July 31 2005, 11:26:57 UTC

LOL. Okay, I went back and removed that extra "absolutely" - hopefully there aren't any other glaring errors. Word hates me. Anyway, thank you. Muahs.

horizon_greene July 31 2005, 11:28:11 UTC

Wonderful.

Love what you've done with dear Ian, and Grant's not too bad either. And Michael is just...completely beyond help - exactly as I picture him in RL :P

Nice job.

ex_sodiumlig110 August 1 2005, 02:53:48 UTC

Hah. *snort*

Thanks.

darkestvoices July 31 2005, 11:28:24 UTC

"Dude, that can't go inside me!"
I think that's the best line in swimfic ever. EVAH!
And I loved the humor. There's not much of it in this fandom and I always welcome it.
And the Grant!love!!!!!!!! It's going to kill me this round. It really is.

ex_sodiumlig110 August 1 2005, 02:54:18 UTC

Uh huh. You know there should be more Grant!love.

Also, I miss Bertie.

speak_stupid July 31 2005, 12:15:11 UTC

Oh my god, that was so much fun! Love flirty!Grant too. And clumsy!Phelpsie.

I read this fic with the song "Done" by Gorillaz playing on repeat and there's a line that just repeats going "It's comin' out, it's comin' out"..aaaah, I love it.

ex_sodiumlig110 August 1 2005, 02:55:45 UTC

LOL. That's incredibly appropriate. Thank you!

viola_ness July 31 2005, 12:29:17 UTC

ah, that was wonderful. Just what I needed. That was so funny and adorable and has completely redeemed our buddy mike in my eyes. I loved the pudding and everything, that was so good. It made my life. And not to mention how cute grant is. And Ian. Ah Ian, gotta love him.

Excellent. Really, loved it.

ex_sodiumlig110 August 1 2005, 02:56:05 UTC

:) Thank you! Although I don't love Ian. I do love me some Grant and Michael though. :D