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Fic: "A Race To The Finish" for parka_girl

Aug 02, 2005 15:48

Title: "A Race To The Finish"
Author: routinexxriot
Pairing: Grant Hackett/Robert vanden Hoogenband, and some Ian/Pieter
Rating: PG/PG-13
Notes: Written for parka_girl for the third swim_ficathon assignment. This didnt come out as nice as I would have liked, but I didnt have many ideas and time got away from me. parka_girl wanted sleeping naked and the song 'Sweat (A la la la long)' and didnt ( Read more... )

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vitawash24 August 2 2005, 15:46:29 UTC

Cute! I like the way the song comes back...and it's very funny to think of Grant sitting there singing it. Glad to see Ian and Pieter get their chance as well.

bolton August 2 2005, 15:54:00 UTC

Thanks! It was very hard finding a way to put the song in there, but it kind of worked in the end.

ferretmalfoy August 2 2005, 16:01:40 UTC

Cute. I want more. NOW! ...please.

bolton August 2 2005, 16:58:04 UTC

Aw, thanks. Maybe Ill write something later.

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bolton August 3 2005, 15:05:33 UTC

Thank you.

viola_ness August 3 2005, 15:02:25 UTC

you make me happy, honestly, you get better every time. It was not bad, don't say so! I'm I wasn't able to be a good beta (I am a beta failure). I liked the incorporation of the song, the unmessy break up, and Robert makes my life. And RObert and Grant at the end also made me very happy.

It was lovely. Really.

bolton August 3 2005, 15:06:46 UTC

Im glad you liked it. And youre not a failure as a beta. I did incorporated a lot of the stuff that we talked about. So, yay. Im glad its a success.

viola_ness August 3 2005, 15:09:10 UTC

parka_girl August 5 2005, 17:18:06 UTC

Aw. Thank you :)

bolton August 5 2005, 18:44:46 UTC

Youre welcome. :D