Comments | swing_21: Gentle rape, rough love

swing_21

Gentle rape, rough love

Oct 24, 2010 03:47

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Disclaimer: Not mine.
Universe: Reboot Trek
Summary: For a prompt on the XI meme: Someone (not from the regular cast, please) rapes Spock, but everything they do to him is very gentle, as if they are making love, no pain. Spock is hurting because it's non-consensual (and maybe because he can hear their thoughts as a touch telepath).
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angst, fic, star trek, rape, kirk/spock

Comments 6

Great Story misspetowker October 24 2010, 19:27:44 UTC

I really liked it - not too much said at the end, just enough to leave us hopeful.

One thing though, "disdainful" doesn't mean what you think it does and it bounced me out of the story. Which was a crying shame because it had grabbed me until then

Re: Great Story swing_21 October 25 2010, 03:35:00 UTC

Thanks for the review and the concrit! English is not my first language, and even though I try to do my best, most of the time I end up structuring my sentences in French :) Thanks for the info again!

amerasu1013 October 25 2010, 15:19:20 UTC

OMG, that was so amazing!
so horrible and awful and sad, and Kirk's reaction was just perfect! Poor Spock, OMG, so horrible! But the second part was great, and the last paragraph was wonderful!
Thank you for sharing!

swing_21 October 25 2010, 23:49:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked! Thanks for reading! :D

toraguru November 27 2010, 00:39:15 UTC

Very good! You did well with the contrast, even double contrast. The rapist was so gentle, but Spock never consented it, while Jim was rough as hell, but Spock wanted it badly. Very, very well written.

the_physicist December 28 2010, 22:37:20 UTC

!!!! amazing! loved this to bits! :-D
Found it through the kink meme - I'm glad you filled that request as you did it really well!