Week 1, Title: Cybervision

Sep 29, 2019 20:02

Cybervision

No more glasses. No more contacts. No more eye exams.

Say goodbye to the expense and hassle with a Cybervision chip. The insertion of which is simple and painless. With Cybervision you will be able to see the world in crisp, high definition as well as having zoom functionality and night-vision which you can control from your phone ( Read more... )

original fiction, lj idol

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rayaso October 1 2019, 16:55:13 UTC
This was excellent, and so much fun. I love the idea of hacking the chips. I thought perhaps that Cybervision might be spying on their users' lives through its product.

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swirlsofblue October 1 2019, 18:22:25 UTC
Thank you, glad you found it fun :). Oh, they're definitely spying on their users, but then what piece of tech nowadays isn't ;)?

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bleodswean October 1 2019, 19:24:09 UTC
Whoa. You do this kind of thing so so so freakin' well. Chilling. And such a perfect prompt response.

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swirlsofblue October 2 2019, 16:41:48 UTC
Thank you so much :).

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murielle October 2 2019, 11:17:00 UTC
Powerful! Disturbing! Relevant!

Wow! You knocked it out of the park! Brava!

Great to see you again!

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swirlsofblue October 2 2019, 16:42:53 UTC
Thank you, so glad you found it powerful and disturbing and relevant :).

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morettaallstar October 2 2019, 16:34:03 UTC
This is flipping fantastic. Love where this is going, as well, but it's great as a standalone, it's wonderfully put together.

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swirlsofblue October 2 2019, 16:43:37 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it :)

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alexanderscttb October 2 2019, 21:13:26 UTC
I do hope this plot continues, because I am eagerly anticipating what happens next!

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swirlsofblue October 3 2019, 19:11:12 UTC
Thank you, so glad it made you want to know what happens next, I guess whether it continues depends on whether the next prompt is conducive to it :).

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