Week 12, Title: Dear Friend

Feb 01, 2020 15:09

Dear friend,

When I say, ‘Happy Birthday’, I hope you know I mean:
I hope this day is good to you,
I hope this year is good to you,
We should all be celebrating,
Because the world became brighter the day you entered it,
My life became brighter when I met you,
You have helped me more than you know,
I wouldn’t be where I am today without you ( Read more... )

original fiction, lj idol, poetry

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karmasoup February 5 2020, 02:17:18 UTC
All of this is a total punch to the gut, how much social mores fail us as humans to relate to one another as we should, and that last reveal makes my heart ache for you. <3

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swirlsofblue February 6 2020, 17:20:21 UTC
Thank you

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murielle February 5 2020, 03:30:37 UTC
Oh yes. Yes, yes, yes.

This is true. So true.

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swirlsofblue February 6 2020, 17:20:32 UTC
Thank you

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alycewilson February 5 2020, 22:18:46 UTC
Heartbreaking. It perfectly captures the way that we tend to rely on short messages to each other, without often saying what we truly feel.

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swirlsofblue February 6 2020, 17:20:49 UTC
Thank you

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halfshellvenus February 6 2020, 03:13:40 UTC
Oh, such heartbreak!

I read these initially as being isolated events, but as they built toward a single story, that ending was just devastating.

When I say, ‘Get well soon’, I hope you know I mean:
When I heard I stared out of the window for a time,
I don’t know how long,
My mind buzzing emptily,
Oh, god. I think most of us know exactly what this feeling is, and so wish we didn't.

I'm so sorry about your friend, and so sorry you've been through this.

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swirlsofblue February 6 2020, 17:20:57 UTC
Thank you

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tonithegreat February 7 2020, 04:03:12 UTC
This is so beautiful and relatable and somber. It makes me want to tell some friends how great they are tomorrow. Thank you.

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swirlsofblue February 7 2020, 19:13:16 UTC
Thank you

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