Week 13, Title: The Dark Sacred Night

[swirlsofblue]

There’s someone starting today. They gather around and give the new worker soft but sombre smiles. This is not a celebration: this is a place of the desperate and the damned. The monstrosity continues to whirr loudly, spanning the entire wall: its blades wider than the breadth of any man’s shoulders.
They run about the place, quick but careful,

Comments

[rayaso]

I very much enjoyed this. The beginning is so ominous, and yet Lem wakes up to hills of green and skies of blue; a bright blessed day after a dark sacred night. "What a Wonderful World"?

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed :)

[roina_arwen]

Very intriguing premise!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you found it intriguing :)

[alycewilson]

Fascinating world you've built here.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

[marlawentmad]

The use of color is art.

[karmasoup]

I love how your title alludes to where one might expect this ending is going, and then the tale followed the hint planted on the musical subconscious.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :)