Title: Moon sinks

[swirlsofblue]

Moon sinks, come awake,
With bars blurry in mind, still half-man half beast,
An unthinking thing, like waking dream, sleepwalks,
In mind’s eye,
Reach for coherence- fail,
Growl or swear or something in-between,
Teeth too big for mouth.

She shakes off the last vestiges of her transformation,
Aware of her nakedness once more- she clothes

Comments

[engarian]

I think I've known a few people like this - LOL.

- Erulisse (one L)

[swirlsofblue]

:)

[viagra]

I liked this a lot! My favorite part is probably the line that's simply "Coffee."

It perfectly evokes that feeling of coffee bliss, when you're bleary-eyed and grumpy and then you take a sip and just... chill. Good work :)

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you liked that coffee line, I was hoping it would work like that :)

[mollywheezy]

Excellent imagery! Well done!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked the imagery :)

[d0gs]

this imagery is amazing. i love this so very much

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked the imagery :)

[tonithegreat]

I like the use of the fantastical in your poem. Morgenmuffel sounds like a wolfish word to me, too! Well done.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked the use of the fantastical :)