Ahh just read through the chaps and love how Yoosu & YunJae are smitten with each other, and Min is loved too...I hope you'll decide to complete this fic >.
i really loved reading the previous chapters. i hope you don't mind a little bit of crit? (not that i'm an expert and i've not even posted any story.) the pacing changed in this chapter, almost like it was rushed. that's all... don't kill me! T_T
I know... T.T I rushed it a little in this chapter because I changed my future plans with this plot...It's like I wanted to bend the pacing so it can lead to more stuff kind of... It's been a long time since I updated this fic and I realized that the plot I had didn't lead to anything so I changed it a bit....I hope you understand @.@...You don't have to feel bad XD I appriciate your crit.! ^-^ you make me a better writer! And hopefully I will improve... X3 Thank you very much for your help! ^-^
I was so happy to see read this update <3 This whole chapter is hilarious! Jae's so dense with the whole Yunho You Know thing and the evil glares at the end were priceless and ooooooh man, I can't wait to read more!! ^^
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Wow, they are moving really fast xD
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can't wait for next chap!!!!
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Thank you for all your comments~ X3
You give me so much motivation to write~! XD
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I was so happy to see read this update <3 This whole chapter is hilarious! Jae's so dense with the whole Yunho You Know thing and the evil glares at the end were priceless and ooooooh man, I can't wait to read more!! ^^
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Always Keep the Faith~! ^o^
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