'Masquerade Ball' For Everlind

[kedi_kedi]

For: everlind
Title: Masquerade Ball
Characters: Yagyuu Hiroshi, Niou Masaharu
Rating: PG
Summary: It isn't about the dance; it's about them.
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine
A/N: A million thanks to S, K, W, and J for cheering me on. This fic would not exist without you guys.

Comments

[sac527]

Oh, Yagyuu…you enabler. ♥

Wonderful fic! I love how comfortable your Niou and Yagyuu are with each other, and I thought it fit well with the easy-going mood.

My favorite lines:
"I actually didn't have anything up my ass until I met you," Yagyuu managed to say with a straight face.
This mental image made me giggle.

and
"What? It's a tennis uniform. He likes tennis." Niou grinned and added ridiculously, "It's even from a winning team."
I love how Niou rationalized his costume choice. (and I love how they're going back to the dance!)

Have you seen Dream Live 7 of the Prince of Tennis musicals? There's a lovely little bit at the end during curtain call:

[everlind]

*______________________*
THANK YOU ANON-SAN!!!

I loved every single line of this!

Firstly of all let me gush about your wonderful writing-style! I love the fluency and your choice of wording. You have a wonderful and inventive way of phrasing what you are conveying to us and your narrative oozed Yagyuu's gentlemanly cleverness all over the place!

What I very much liked is how true you kept the characters and their personalities, how you kept the dynamic between the two of them intact, but also added the deeper layer of trust, love and mutual respect between them. I love how Yagyuu handles Niou, it seems very like him. And like sac527 pointed out... he is such an enabler :p

Their conversations were made of sheer crystallized brilliance and the banter cracked me up all over the place :D
..."Just," he added as they pulled apart for air, "don't turn into Sanada again."...THE IMAGE THIS GIVES ME IS GOOOOOLDEN

[lucathia_rykatu]

I thought that part about hungry kisses turning into slower ones with them taking their time was really sweet. :)

[monarchist]

I loved Yagyuu in this. He was fantastic. I was laughing throughout about the school being worried what Niou would do and just happy that Yagyuu was dealing with it instead of him. Great work!

[kedi_kedi]

I reiterate what shay_nekochan said in that I really loved that portion of dialogue, really XDDDD

Brilliant interaction and dialogue, Niou was such a bristling hedgehog and Yagyuu a suave bitch ;> What a funny combination XDDD