'In Focus' for Monarchist

[kedi_kedi]

For: monarchist
Title: In Focus
Characters: Yagyuu Hiroshi x Niou Masaharu
Rating: R
Summary: Niou finds a way to relieve stress during exams during his first year of university.
Warnings: Blow job.
Disclaimer: I do not own, and I do not make profit from Prince of Tennis.
A/N: I hope you like this. Enjoy. ;)

Comments

[monarchist]

UNF. Wow. Seriously, this was awesome.

In particular this line:
The assignment was so infuriatingly simply that Niou had put it off until the last moment. It wasn’t until he actually picked up his camera that he realized how difficult it really was.

And Yagyuu was just amazing. He's proper and debauched in all the right places. I want to give him a high five.

I love Niou's voice in this. I like how he noticed the little things.

They sat together, Niou’s attention on the way their bodies made a perfect line against each other, rather than the ride to campus.

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Thank you!!!

[everlind]



"I can’t believe you talk to my mother." Niou rolled his eyes as they left the apartment building and into the street.

Oh c'mon, Niou. It's Yagyuu :p

This was damned sexy. The idea of someone as prim and proper as Yagyuu being the one to do the, well, sexiness, it adds for a delicious image.

Your Yagyuu is amazing. He's got a lot of depth to him, more than just his 'Gentleman' image. Their interaction is believable and very human and still, thank you so very much, boyish at turns.

I love the fumbling and the careless kissing and naughtiness.

Niou is also very observing, which fits the image I have of him.

Awesome! Thank you anon-san, for the hard work!

[crystalusagi]

Congrats, writer-san. That was extremely hot <3

I enjoyed the dialogue as well, esp. Yagyuu's closing line. =D Kudos!

[onlysayitonce]

I liked that this felt like a very real possibility for Niou and Yagyuu. Their relationship was interesting and, of course, hot. Niou's final photo is great, too.