Building and Burning [Chapter Five: Every Half Hour Is A Countdown]

Jun 19, 2008 17:43

Title// Building and Burning [Chapter Five: Every Half Hour Is A Countdown]
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beck, koyuki, saku, maho, taira, ryuusuke

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ansibs June 23 2008, 18:25:40 UTC
AUGH Woman, you just make me go to pieces, I swear. With every new little development in their relationship - Maho finding out, the band finding out, the whole not-hiding feel of it all - I realize again how hooked I am on this. All the little details you put in there, like Ryuusuke singing, and that Saku tsks at them like they're naughty kids...I can see it all so clearly in my head, it's amazing the way you describe them so clearly.

"Just a sec, my buddy needs some help with his fish tank."

Congratulations Ryuusuke, you just found the best way to panic. Ever.

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swn_2gthr_wrng June 24 2008, 23:46:15 UTC
Thanks! Lol, I'm flattered. *blush* Oh Ryuusuke *shakes head* what're we going to do with you?

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rare_fandom June 28 2008, 06:31:03 UTC
I second what ansibs said about Ryusuke’s panic. And I’d like to add that after I read that, I kept having the mental image of Saku making fish faces at Ryusuke, who keeps glaring at him because he’s trying to concentrate on his mother’s phone call.

And I’m much amused at their reaction to Taira’s work outfit. Mainly because that’s the reaction I have every time I see it.

Interested to see the next chapter (and hell, I don’t even like Ryusuke/ Taira)

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swn_2gthr_wrng June 28 2008, 21:05:55 UTC
The chance to make fun of Taira's work outfit was just too good to pass up- and I'm glad to know that I wasn't the only one who was reminded of the Village People.

Well that must mean I'm doing something right, getting someone not into the pairing into the story. ^_^;;

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