Of Sprites and Polaroids: Chapter 1

[swoon21]

Foreword: This is the story I've been working on for over a year now. It all started with an image of Tegoshi circa 2010 and grew from there. I started it before Benefits and other 2 stories I posted before. It's the longest story I've written and the most complex one. I have never invested so much of myself into any work before. I was especially

Comments

[shivergal99]

^o^ ahh you have a new story out!~ ;w;
This ones so cool and really sweet. I actually adore how you capture their personalities spot on. Shige's careful and thoughtful ways and Tegoshi's "I'll just go with it and do what I want" attitude.

“Yes, Mum.” << that part made me laugh so much xD ;w; I loved it and I can't wait to read the next chapters~!

[anonymous]

Finally!! I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next chater!!!

[stereo_ty]

Again, yaass at your accurate depictions of Tegoshige's characters. The flow is nice and I'm interested to see how this story will go~ Shige is sweet lol Also, the photo at the end :D

I really like this part:
“Listen, I know you like film cameras but this is different. You don’t have to worry about all that tuning - you can just capture what you see. Doesn’t matter if it comes out a bit blurred. I got one too. We can exchange our pictures later.” Tegoshi smiled softly and Shige thought he knew where to start.

[9kinds]

This was really cute!

I think this line was really fitting, and it made me laugh:

" “Oh, I thought I’d hit a senpai.” Tegoshi said looking a little relieved. Shige felt like he should be offended but he wasn’t. "

I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

[kumohime102]

New story! Very cute beginning and I'm curious to know where it's going. Loved the fanart too, specially the pic at the end.

Will be looking forward to the next part!