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stereo_ty April 21 2015, 20:23:09 UTC
What kind of plot turn D: Even more expectant for the next chapters alskdfld Also nice photo choice~ I like this part (the imagery is pretty):

“Again.” This time there were candles painting the room in amber hues and accentuating the sharp features of the young man in Shige’s bed. The flight was due next morning.

“Now?“ Shige was breathing hard his body still tingling.

“Of course now.” Tegoshi was lying on his back with his arms thrown over his head. His body was covered in a sheen of sweat and looked like it was sparkling.

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elibelliey April 22 2015, 06:56:18 UTC
D: my heart

Poor Shige just when he was starting to calm..
Such a good cliffhanger!! I'm anxious to see what happens next.

Tego does have some delicious thighs lololol

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swoon21 April 23 2015, 13:45:51 UTC
Thanks for the comment. I'm do my best not to disappoint.

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shivergal99 April 23 2015, 10:31:09 UTC
;; I really like this chapter the most so far It was a huge plot twist and turn xD;;
poor bby T^T

I really liked how you used the photography part as a way of clinging on to the memories of that last week. It really showed more depth to shige's character;;

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swoon21 April 23 2015, 11:38:01 UTC
I'm really glad to hear that. I didn't think it was a very original plot twist but I'm glad it was unexpected for people.

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shivergal99 April 23 2015, 12:54:59 UTC
Hmm it's true it's been used in a lot of stories before, but I think it's how you use the ideas that give it that impact and you did it perfectly~

>u< I look forward to reading more~!

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swoon21 April 23 2015, 13:43:09 UTC
I'm happy to hear that. I'm not aiming for originality but rather for a well-balanced story and emotional accuracy.

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yuyayuko August 26 2015, 07:45:26 UTC
my kokoro i cried ok the twist here.. its sooo beautiful the way you describe shiges feelings everything but somehow i kinda wonder about tegoshi how he feels here i mean i know the story is told fr shiges pov but.. ok i better move to the next chapter..

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