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stereo_ty May 10 2015, 14:21:26 UTC
;A; It's already over alksdf. It was a really good, well-rounded cute story <3 Very bittersweet at times but it ended well ;;
And yay sexy times~
The parts I liked most: Ever since he was a child, Shige like to dramatize the events of his life. Maybe it was because he didn't have that many to begin, with but at some point he began to cherish everything that happened to him, every single episode, good or bad. The park was almost empty at this hour and Shige could imagine he was a hero in an action film. A hero with a broken heart, wounded but still standing, It was masochistic in a way but somehow it helped.

“I’m not going to say I can’t live without you because I can." Tegoshi said meeting his eyes. "But I don’t want to.”
It was like the final scene in a classic old movie, Shige thought. Except in the movies, nobody ever has red noses and puffy eyes.

Woooo

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swoon21 May 10 2015, 14:41:43 UTC
Thank you, dear. For once, I agree with these parts you chose, I like them a lot too. Also glad you like my sexy times but they pale in comparison to yours. xd

That you for supporting and encouraging me throughout the way, it's been a long one but I'm satisfied with how this turned out. I'm glad I finally finished this, it means a lot to me. ♥

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stereo_ty May 10 2015, 15:55:56 UTC
"For once, I agree with these parts you chose" lmfaoo excuse me xD. And lksjgurlshhhnoksljdf
And no worries, it was fun~ I bet, congrats ♥

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shivergal99 May 12 2015, 10:16:27 UTC
^o^ Uwaa im late to read *sobs ( ... )

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swoon21 May 12 2015, 11:31:18 UTC
Thank you, dear. You're not really late, you're only second to stereo and I personally informed her.

I'm really glad you loved the story and I managed to get across my images and ideas. Of course, I tried to keep the characters intact but since it's an AU I had more freedom. But either way they inherited some of my beliefs and my idea of a functional relationship.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

PS: You may also check out the Concept Art in the last post.

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shivergal99 May 12 2015, 15:27:27 UTC
Uwaa oh my gosh im squealing, the concept art and ideas itself are so wonderful. xD thats such a cute idea, you've got a lot of deditcations. I won't say what the concept art is here so I dont spoil for others and they can get the full impact.

Thats such a wonderful idea;; it really tops it all off x'D Ive got such a big grin on my face.
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about the characters[even though its tegoshige], your ideals etc of a relationship are true to life so I'm more than certain they believe those in real too! tegoshis always like: " id choose my work, I want to be able to do my own thing" So I really love it all xD

Thank you for writing! I look forward to seeing more of your work >w< <3

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swoon21 May 12 2015, 16:38:30 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. I've been collecting these all the time while writing the story. Thank you for sharing your impressions. It means a lot. I don't have any new ideas at the moment, at least tangible enough to start writing, I put all my resources to finish this project so hopefully I'll get them in time. I actually was contemplation doing a little epilogue but right now the image is not clear enough to write.

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9kinds May 18 2015, 13:22:14 UTC
I don't usually comment much, but I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing and posting it. :)

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swoon21 May 18 2015, 16:31:02 UTC
I'm glad, thanks for commenting)

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rangerfranny July 17 2015, 20:16:54 UTC
I just finished reading the fic and it was damn good. You had me crying in chachapter 4! Still I love how you portray them. I was wondering if the unfortunate roommate was Massu? It would be great if it's him! And the pictures are pretty well edited n chosen! I'll read your others fics now!
Again thank you for this fanfiction!

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swoon21 July 17 2015, 23:14:08 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, that is correct. I wanted to incorporate Massu into the story but in the end I never managed to so I thought I'd at least leave this little tribute. I really want to write a short epilogue to this but I'm not in the writing mood lately.

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rangerfranny July 18 2015, 11:29:29 UTC
Yay I was right! Well take your time! Better have a long wait and having you being satisfy than an epilogue half done and you feeling frustrated ^^

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yuyayuko August 26 2015, 08:30:25 UTC
ohmygod it's over ashkasjllf can i have a sequel for this pls. this is just so good i so love every single bit of this story, the confession part got me right in the heart.. the picts on every chapter are also pretty.. I'm goin to re-read this again later, thank you so much Aya for writing this, really looking forward for your next work.

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swoon21 August 26 2015, 10:51:55 UTC
Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. You can check the "Deluxe" post for more images if you want. There shall be no sequel but I do want to write a short epilogue, I can't finish it yet. Also there's a brand new story on the way.

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yuyayuko September 1 2015, 05:41:42 UTC
So where exactly the deluxe post is? lol. culdn't find it here.

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swoon21 September 1 2015, 10:37:21 UTC
It's right above this one.

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