Wants and Needs

Sep 27, 2015 02:42

Title: Wants and Needs
Pairings: Shige/Tegoshi
Rating: NC-17
A/N: I had this story in mind for a couple of months before I began to write it down. The reason I didn’t write it at once was mainly because the few scenes I had in my head were silent but very intense, like a movie and I really didn’t feel confident I could write it in a way that others ( Read more... )

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stereo_ty September 27 2015, 00:38:17 UTC
Eeeee, I really liked this. Especially Tegoshi's cynical lectures lol. Definitely one of my favs now, you wrote this really well, and quite easy to relate to both characters. Very enjoyable~ They cute <3
Fav parts:
“Hi,” the blond said looking up and approaching him. He seemed to hesitate for a moment, then pulled out a bouquet of white lilies from behind his back. Shige had to blink a few times to make sure we wasn’t dreaming. (akljsdjf)

“Aren’t you going back? They’re probably waiting for you,” Shige asked breaking the silence.
“I’m always where I want to be,” the man replied firmly but he stepped back from the railing.

Also that last poster ;DD

ALSO black haired Tegoshi <3 <3

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yuyayuko September 27 2015, 03:19:02 UTC
Ohmygodd Aya!! Where to start ( ... )

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swoon21 September 27 2015, 10:46:54 UTC
Thanks for your comment, coherent or not it's appreciated. I feel like it's still lacking in many ways but it was a new important step for me. Also I might continue it, hopefully.

The poster at the bottom? I modified it from a screencap of a concert, the 10ve one. I'm send them to you later.

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rangerfranny September 27 2015, 13:18:08 UTC
I really enjoy the story plot and how you portrayed the boys. Shige was sweet and i really like how he is sort of fighting with his attraction for Tegoshi. Sorry i am not good when it comes to write comments on fic ^^;
Still i really enjoyed this one!

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swoon21 September 27 2015, 13:26:22 UTC
Thank you! Any comment is appreciated)) Unless it's 'tnx'.

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ext_2755923 September 27 2015, 16:21:09 UTC
I really liked it ;o;
They were so cute~ but I felt Shige was emotionless sometimes xD
Sorry to never leave comments~ I'm really bad with this

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