The Odds

[swoon21]

Title: The Odds
Pairings: Shige/Tegoshi
Rating: NC-17
A/N: This is a sequel to my earlier work, Wants and Needs.

Comments

[yuyayuko]

Ok where to begin, I pretty much have spammed you on dm. so first of all thank you for writing this ive been in desperate need of reading new tegoshiges fic lol you know this very well tbh. What to say? Oh gosh I just love this so much. Your writing never failed to amaze me. It sounds like im exaggerating things bc this is a tegoshige fic so thats why I think this is good but believe me im not. The talks here, their conversations, they’re like really deep, that part for example when they talk whether their relationship would last or not, about shige telling tegoshi that he should always be honest, tegoshi elaborating things about people being so vulnerable when they’re attached to others, the odds of them meeting.. this list would be endless tbh.

And oh of course all the sex scenes here. all I felt was pain, they were too much I wish I was the bed lmfao im like rereading right now. how did you write this? I have to admit my fave is where they watched that French movie together I told you this already but hell I can clearly picture

[swoon21]

Thank you for the detailed comment, dear. It means a lot.

[shivergal99]

I've already ranted so many times over and over but they should be said here as well, so if people want to read this story. They certainly should.
; v ; The thing I've always loved about your writing is that it's just so magically written, its perfect ( or as close to it as you can get ), even from a non-shipper POV, I can say I really enjoy reading everything you write. The 'characters' or people, I guess is better to say, are so well written, like you just literally make everything come from 2D to 3D and realistic.
I'm really bad with words but thank you for these fics and the plots ;; I really enjoy your writing.

I think my favourite part of the fic was at the party, just I think that was a great way to develop their relationship or how much they've changed each other. ;; (( i dont want to spoil it for ppl in case they read the comments first ))

I look forward to all your next pieces and continue to cheer you on with your works!! Thank you !! :D

//proudly shows them to others tbh ;; v ;; <3 thank you Aya

[swoon21]

Thank you for the comment! I don't know if anyone reads the comments first, this is for me because I'm greedy like that)

[stereo_ty]

Ahhh that was really nice. Long and filled with sweetness, and I think my favorite part of it all is how you started and ended the story with Shige dropping off Tegoshi at university. That character development at the end lol so complete~. You wrote this really well, and as usual I look forward to your other stuff!!