OOC - HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[swordandscales]

How is my driving? How am I doing with my character? Any issues and concerns you have with how I play Saft go here. And this means anything, relationships, how she goes about things, anything she's done you get the drill

Comments

[sun_smiles]

I have to second all of the points that Envy made here.

After watching it go on for over a month, I realize this HAL plot is getting really ridiculous and it might benefit you to get out of it.

[flashaddict]

Thirded.

I had no idea the HAL plot was still actually going on. I feel like it's been happening forever....

[vitalregionsnow]

I SECOND EVERYTHING JORDAN JUST SAID. Getting someone else to proofread your posts wouldn't hurt, because as one anon pointed out on the meme, you've misspelled the word "lose" numerous times in a row before. *such a grammar nazi*

And for some reason, half-dragon characters just annoy me in general. It seems cliche and overused. It may also have to do with those otherkin furries constantly going on about how they have the spirit of a dragon inside of them.

Oh, plus, repeating posts gets pretty annoying too. As Jordan mentioned above, you've done the whole "SAFT HAS GONE CRAZY AND IS BURNING ALL YOUR STUFF" thing quite a few times before.

[swordandscales]

Point taken, I'm actually going to try and let Saft have a break at the moment and develop my other characters.

Thanks for the concrit.

[ridethetiger]

Eep late cat is lateHey! I know we kinda talked about it before, but uh, if I haven't said it yet - well for one, you shouldn't be worried for being judged for serious characterization at cldr because... well. You know. :\ It's caps. I believe that's why some became frustrated with Saft because you almost always put srs bzns into what's supposed to be pure horrendously insane cracky fun

[shazzaroo]

So late... ;__;

I was going to post anonymously but it makes it less serious. Ripping off a plaster here, quick and simple. I dislike Saft I'm sorry to say. I find her to much of a mary-sue type and too srs.

Firstly I get the feeling you want Saft to experience everything...EVERYTHING. Things have to revolve around her. I've noticed in serveral recent posts that you've made about Saft, and Saft only. That is why you get only about 2 different characters commenting on your post.

Also, she is an OC. For every new person that joins I feel like you're giving them everything at once. If they want to know about your character, they'll read her journal. To be honest I like OC's such as Kavachi and such but yours just pisses me off. She's srs, too srs for my liking and judging by everyone elses comments, for their liking also.

My advice is just to tone-down the srs posts and if you're going to post often, post interaction posts or posts that involve other characters more. I'm sure she'll be liked that way.

Ty x

[onasmallerscale]

That's cool I appreciate the input

Yo! Former Capslock Vinny here reporting! Account oh so related

[bladedscars]

I haven't really get to know your character too well but I was just amused at the conversation with her and Vincent. Yeah I really know how you feel with the cliche and simple stuff. I really do want to reconstruct and fix my characters. Like this character but to be honest I really can suck at describing things. :/

So yeah keep it up buddy!

[swordandscales]

Holy cow! o.o Long time no see sort of?

Thanks sweety I'll do my best.

lol 2nd ooc i've created

[stolenfromfate]

Np! just message me anytime if ya want to rp or whatever cuz I need to practice on those 2 oc's ^^;;