Hey everyone. This is a song I just wrote for my upcoming band Young Masbeth. Check it out and lemme know whatcha think. I know you can't hear the melody or anything but still any feedback would be nice! Thanks and God bless!
verse 1:
i was strolling along
not a care in the world
my thoughts on a song
not a care in the world
but before too long
i was there in the world
and everything was gone
You was there in my world
bridge:
the light flashed, it brought in a spark
where before i was lost in the dark
you kept me alive and You opened my heart
i fell to my knees in prospect park
chorus:
that's where i found You
that's where You raised me up
when i humbled myself
that's where it all became clear
You wiped away my tears
and cured of me fears
in Prospect Park
verse 2:
i looked between the trees
and i saw the light shine
the rustling of the leaves
put me in the right mind
i just could not believe
that this was the time
to fall down on my knees
and for me to find
bridge:
the light flashed, it brought in a spark
where before i was lost in the dark
you kept me alive and You opened my heart
i fell to my knees in prospect park
chorus:
that's where i found You
that's where You raised me up
when i humbled myself
that's where it all became clear
You wiped away my tears
and cured of me fears
in Prospect Park
verse 3:
i never knew
if i would ever find You
something had to give
You told me how to live
but i never knew
if i could ever find You
still you opened up my heart
in Prospect Park!
chorus:
that's where i found You
that's where You raised me up
when i humbled myself
that's where it all became clear
You wiped away my tears
and cured of me fears
in Prospect Park
© 2004 J. Stewart