this is raw..there are lots of errors.. i wrote it when I was a freshman.. I want to finish it

[syfagonnaherpes]

If it hadn’t been raining so hard last Wednesday afternoon the passing cars would have heard the gunshots in my house. They would have seen the flash of light from my .357 through the window of the living room. They would have called the police. There would have been an investigation, and I would be in jail

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[fuckwhatyaheard]

i really like that. is there more?