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syhrain

Yakuza and the Runaway Bride part 7

Sep 16, 2013 06:05

Title: Yakuza and the Runaway Bride
Username: syhrain
Pairing: Asami x Akihito
Spoiler: None I guess…
Rating/Warning: NC-17. AU
Disclaimer: All Viewfinder characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Author’s notes: Thank you for my wonderful beta yukina99

Summary: Force marriage has caused Akihito to meet a certain powerful yakuza.

All thoughts are in italic.
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Comments 36

belllda September 15 2013, 22:55:58 UTC

Thank you for new chapter! :)
I'm looking forward to reading about how Asami is going to deal with Ouji!

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:38:30 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting too:D

zinnia_23 September 15 2013, 22:57:57 UTC

Oh wow! I thought for a moment that Asami was going to go apeshit when he saw the marks. Why didnt he tell his men to cause a distraction when Aki was at Ouji's so Aki could leave or something?

I wonder how Ouji is going to be punished, that Insensitive jerk.

Thanks so much for updating.

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:40:56 UTC

Given Asami's business relation with Ouji's father, he can't act recklessly.

Thanks for reading:D

safa56bmc September 15 2013, 23:01:46 UTC

am i the first...am i?????....yay....i waited long for this..can u simply make Ouji disappear...i dont like him...

safa56bmc September 15 2013, 23:02:13 UTC

errr i was the third...and now the fourth...

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:42:44 UTC

Haha, it's okay. you'll get another chance to be the first at another chapter.

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:41:57 UTC

I'll make his disappear eventually in the later chapter.
Thanks for reading:D

ultamatempa September 15 2013, 23:19:25 UTC

a bit puzzling that asami was keeping such close tabs on akihito and still managed to let ouji have him. i feel bad for aki, the men in his life are insensitive assholes who don't even place his wellbeing in consideration. seriously, the poor boy was raped, having sex with him immediately afterwards is an incredibly bad idea.

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:47:11 UTC

Given his business relation with Ouji's father, he can't act recklessly without any good plan.In this chapter, I want to show the possessive side of Asami where he lost his mind when he saw Ouji's marks on Aki. I'll try to write the more gentle him next time.

Thanks for reading:)

nbsiren September 16 2013, 01:04:23 UTC

I wanna hug Akihito, Ouji really needs Asami to kick his ass~
can't wait for more^^

syhrain September 22 2013, 16:47:21 UTC

Thank you!!!