The fic begin with great beginning. And Asami reaction is just so Asami. Because, we should admit that he is no caring person and it was only because in the canon, Aki has successfully captured his highness attention that the nobody photographer can be beside him...hmmm...hmmm....I wanna chapter two now lol..
Interesting story. I can't wait to see where you go with it.
And one small point. I'd be careful with your use of the Japanese currency. To convert from yen to USD you can essentially take off two zeros therefore an offer of payment of 1 million yen (which sounds like a lot) is really only about $10,000 USD. Not that much really.
Well, I read that bit and after I'd converted the money into USD, I thought, "geez, I'd throw that suitcase in his face, too, if I were Aki's Mom. Offering $20,000 USD (ten thousand USD each) for hurting my boy, what an insult|". And then, "haha, now I know where Aki gets his temper from". (well, they do say that boys get their temperament from their mothers).
I figured it was Asami being the usual heartless crime lord. (but I did think that maybe he was covering the hospital expenses and this was over and above that amount).
I lurk around here waiting for the next bit. (but take your time - I notice you tend to want quality over quantity and I appreciate that very much).
Yup. I imagine Aki's mother as a loving mother who has the same temper as her son. So just like Aki, she has high pride. Whether or not Aki's father will be doing something reckless, I have not really think about it. So we'll just see later when the story progress;)
In this story, I want to portray Asami as a heartless crime lord. Aki will be the one who bring warmth into his cold heart. Sorry if it looked uncaring.
I'll try to update once I have time. Thanks for your kind comments (^v^)
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Thank you for sharing this new fic with us ! Can't wait for more to come *__*
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I'll start writing chapter two once I have the time.
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And one small point. I'd be careful with your use of the Japanese currency. To convert from yen to USD you can essentially take off two zeros therefore an offer of payment of 1 million yen (which sounds like a lot) is really only about $10,000 USD. Not that much really.
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Glad that you like the story.
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I figured it was Asami being the usual heartless crime lord. (but I did think that maybe he was covering the hospital expenses and this was over and above that amount).
I lurk around here waiting for the next bit. (but take your time - I notice you tend to want quality over quantity and I appreciate that very much).
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In this story, I want to portray Asami as a heartless crime lord. Aki will be the one who bring warmth into his cold heart. Sorry if it looked uncaring.
I'll try to update once I have time.
Thanks for your kind comments (^v^)
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