His First Love part 12

Jul 02, 2012 21:55

Title: His First Love
Author: syhrain
Pairings: Asami x Akihito
Spoiler: expect some
Warning/Rating: involve time travel. R
Disclaimer: All Viewfinder characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Author’s note: As usual, unbeta. So apologise in advance if I make any spelling and grammar mistakes. The date I put is just random date. 200X means present, 199X means ( Read more... )

viewfinder, his first love

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ameris57 July 2 2012, 18:13:51 UTC
No don't stop there. Mooooooreeeee. See forward to the next chapter. Update soon. Big kisses and hugs.

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syhrain July 6 2012, 14:50:04 UTC
Thanks (*^▽^*)
I'll try to update soon.

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vongolauchiha July 2 2012, 19:19:57 UTC
Ok surely any man as sane minded and inteligent man like asami would question the sanity of such a proclamation. This is roughly a possible scenario is going through my mind which is like this.....

Aki- "Asami, I come from the future.”
Asami- "....................."
Aki- "Asami?"
Asami- "Crap, I just aksed a complete nut job to stay with me forever!"
Aki- "Hey! I'm telling the truth! Wait, what are you doing!?"
Asami- *filps out phone and dials a number* "I need the good doctors in clean white coats to come pick up my new pet he's gone mad. Oh and don't forget the strait jacket."
Aki- *Speechless*

Of course i'm very sure this isn't how it ends because your awesome and i can't wait for more and to see asamis' reaction to akis confession. Thanks for the update :)

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takara94 July 3 2012, 13:53:58 UTC
LoLol~ XDDD that could happen~ XDD

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syhrain July 6 2012, 14:54:28 UTC
Lol. I can also imagine that to happen (^▽^)
Well, i think asami will believe his lover.
Thanks for reading and the special comment:-)

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seichirou July 2 2012, 22:13:23 UTC
no....
how could you stop there...?
please update soon if you can!!

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syhrain July 6 2012, 14:57:04 UTC
I'll try to update as soon as possible.
Thanks for reading (⌒▽⌒)

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monrque July 2 2012, 23:16:43 UTC
my heart is so happy u updated. i love thjs chapter

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syhrain July 6 2012, 15:41:53 UTC
*blush* thank you (☆^ー^☆)

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mozaya July 2 2012, 23:32:31 UTC
wow can't wait to read Asami's reaction to Aki's confession! a date on a boat... Young Asami's so romantic (want a man like that tooTT_TT)...
So following your story, the first "meeting" when Asami raped Aki the first time was his retribution for making him wait 10 years? that could be really plausible (punishment then saving Aki when he goes back and meet the corrupt cop)

Well i hope you'll update soon and thanks for this chapter

ps: totally love Vongolauchiha's comment, could totally see that be true^^

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syhrain July 7 2012, 08:17:22 UTC
Yup, young asami show his feeling more. Yeah, asami not really like it because aki make him wait for 10 years.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll try to update soon:D

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