Why I Love Him

Aug 31, 2006 11:02

Title: Why I Love Him
Summary: Why Pete Loves Patrick the way he does.
Rating: softsoftsoftsoftsoft PG
Notes: Been having a bad week. Please read, and comment. Hell, don't read, just comment for all I care! But, please make my week better before I head back to school!
He Loves Me )

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anonymous August 31 2006, 20:57:49 UTC
I enjoyed this muchly, thankyou for posting it.

I especially liked the imagery of them having their arms around one another, and that it takes Patrick some time to "get it" (the "Oh....").

And the last line really seals the deal, as it were.

(sorry, no lj)

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sykoxfreak August 31 2006, 21:01:49 UTC
It's quite alright, I had a lot of fun writing it.

I love niave!Patrick! It's just so adroable.

I was listening to Tonic's 'When She Says She Loves Me' when I wrote the last line.

(That's okay. If yo get this, which I don't know if you will, how did you find my lj?)

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megyal August 31 2006, 23:00:31 UTC
This is really sweet. I like it a lot. But did you mean "naivety" instead of nativity?

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sykoxfreak September 2 2006, 00:05:11 UTC
Thanks. I probably did. I used the lj spell check, and I just chose the one that looked the closest. I'm not a naturally good speller...Oh well. Thanks for reading though!

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