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Once Upon a Blah Blah Blah

Mar 22, 2009 19:06

Title: Once Upon a Blah Blah Blah
Author: cameroncrazed
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4428
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: Here ye, here ye, own not do I anything to do with the concepts and characters of “Heroes”.

Written for challenge #12: four corners at sylaire_chall and prompt #4: prodigious tintinnabulation for the Ridiculously Specific prompt table. Thanks to ladyanne525 for betaing :)

( Once upon a time, in a land far, far away… )

challenge #12

Comments 16

raitheemohugger March 22 2009, 23:40:38 UTC

OH MY GOD YOU ARE MY FAVORITE PERSON IN THE WORLD RIGHT NOW.
This was perfection. PERFECTION.
Perfection deep fried and wrapped in chocolate, which is how we make it where I'm from.

cameroncrazed March 24 2009, 02:02:50 UTC

Mmmm... nomnomnom...deep fried chocolately perfection - I'm hungry now :) Thanks! ;)

raitheemohugger March 22 2009, 23:41:24 UTC

Also, the wit! So much of it. This made me laugh the most, though:
"Claude, Duke of Fenwick, although no one’s seen him since the first day."

I'm a sucker for a good pun.

buh dum ching!

cameroncrazed March 24 2009, 02:03:27 UTC

:) I had to include the puns, I just had to. The bit about the disappearing Claude was one of the very first things written for this one :) Glad you like :)

kathrynthegr8 March 23 2009, 00:02:24 UTC

I don't know which I like more the fairytale or the snarky narrator!

Very, very well done!

cameroncrazed March 24 2009, 02:03:45 UTC

I love the snarky narrator :) Thank you so much :)

josiefier March 23 2009, 00:19:41 UTC

Okay - first thing's first - I LOVE THE NARRIRATION! "Like those nice Grimm boys" :happy sigh:

And King of Petrellicest! LMAO! Yep, that's Nathan alright! LOL! And the oyster sucking cow line - oh man, now THIS is my kind of fairy tale! Well this and Rapunzel, but that's an addiction for a different day. This is amazing - just :DDD yeah lol

And yes, uber bonus points for not just how you portrayed Luke, but also how he described Ando LOL!

cameroncrazed March 24 2009, 02:04:26 UTC

So very glad you like, and thanks! :)

I just had to include Petrellicest and a reference to the glorious Angela from the last episode :)

dianelyn March 23 2009, 03:40:14 UTC

This was great!! Sooo funny, and the titles of each character were brilliant. (memo to self: stop drinking your coffee the first time you spit it all over your laptop...)

cameroncrazed March 24 2009, 02:05:02 UTC

Thank you :) I'm sorry about the incompatibility of coffee and electronics ;)