Comments | sylelle_100: The cake is a lie

di_elle in sylelle_100

The cake is a lie

Feb 17, 2010 17:58

Title: The cake is a lie
Author: di_elle
Rating: PG-13 (curse and one "f" word)
Challenge:#20 - consequence
Notes/Warning:: Can be considered a complete AU or post season 4 finale . Un-betaed, so any mistakes are mine, sorry

( Cursed the day he had taken that power! )

#20 - consequence, by - di_elle, rating - pg13

Comments 15

kristen_88 February 19 2010, 03:02:43 UTC

That was so sad and so beautiful, I loved the way you ended it.

di_elle February 19 2010, 22:49:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

disalae February 27 2010, 01:01:26 UTC

Awww...so great. The last part is killer, I can just imagine the "well...crap" in his head. You should write mooooore :)

di_elle February 27 2010, 01:15:26 UTC

Thank you! yes, he can't blame someone else this time....
I have ideas but literally no time to put it down and see if they work, damn RL ;)
And I have still my noms to do too ah ah

portkeys April 15 2010, 02:02:32 UTC

You win for the Portal ref!

di_elle April 15 2010, 14:03:31 UTC

Thanks!