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sylnl

154 Closing

Jun 15, 2012 09:00

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fan fiction, !author|artist: sylnl, romance, atwt, drama, rating pg, dr. reid oliver, luke/reid. word soap

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reidsmum June 15 2012, 07:30:41 UTC

Amazing, the way you write is a true gift. It makes me so happy to read this story every day.

Thank you so much!

sylnl June 15 2012, 11:39:43 UTC

*big happy blush* thanks!!!! xxx

scotianova June 15 2012, 09:10:09 UTC

Some snowflakes came out of nowhere and landed on his nose. It made him smile.

Wonderful - that's similar to experiencing a sunset at the seaside when you feel the universe is talking to you - yes, wonderful.

"reidsmum: Amazing, the way you write is a true gift. It makes me so happy to read this story every day.Thank you so much!"

SECOND This with all my heart.

Syl - I hope you'll be given a sweet sign of the universe, too - this weekend. Maybe warming sunbeams, an enlightning sky, or some petals landing on your nose:))

sylnl June 15 2012, 11:39:23 UTC

Thank you SO much. Don't you just love those signs? I know they'll be there. I just hope I'll be aware of them:-) xxx

ext_1190928 June 15 2012, 11:35:03 UTC

Wow. Now onto her new life.

Now Zoe's parents died or abandoned? Originally I thought died, but now I think left her?

sylnl June 15 2012, 11:38:27 UTC

The answer can be found in chapter 136

“Zoë was found on the side of the road, next to her parents. The parents were murdered and Zoë’s leg and a few ribs were broken, but she was alive.”

xxx

ext_1190928 June 18 2012, 12:16:12 UTC

I thought they were with her but dead. But then I thought I read someplace abandoned.

Thank you!!!

shadownyc June 15 2012, 12:00:59 UTC

The end of this episode truly touched my heart. Beautiful moment!

I looked again at your hiatus and am glad you're giving yourself a one month break to relax and recharge. :D

sylnl June 18 2012, 09:59:01 UTC

Thanks! I really need this break and I started realizing how much after I made the decision to have one:-)

traciamc June 15 2012, 15:04:18 UTC

I had tears in my eyes in this chapter. First of all, I am so happy that Zoë is trusting Luke. I imagine watching her parents killed and surviving would make her trust no one. It's so good that she is giving that gift to herself and to Luke. I believe she trust Reid and Danny as well, so this family will most definitely help her to heal.

The house...I can only imagine how painful that would be for her. I am pleasantly surprised that she dealt with it so well.

I loved the ending. It's the dawn of a new day for Zoë and for Luke, Reid and Danny.

Wonderful! Have a great weekend!

sylnl June 18 2012, 10:00:10 UTC

I'm not so sure how she dealt with it, to be honest. She's pretty closed off.

But I'm glad you were touched. Thanks for caring!!! xxx