157 Dawn is breaking

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Comments

[hilja83]

Wow, this w= such a great chapter.

*yay* for Luke for not letting Zoe spoil Danny`s suprise, and the reaction Danny gave too his suprise CHICKENSKIN!!!!!

[sylnl]

Hahahaha, thanks!

[ext_1196226]

What a lovely chapter! I fall in love each and everytime I read a new chapter! Dawn is a good name for his first pony. What does she look like?

[sylnl]

You can find a picture of her on http://www.sylicious.com/astheworldkeepsturning/

Today's chapter has a picture of Handsome (same url)

[petuniagirl]

Welcome Dawn! Wonderful chapter.

[sylnl]

Thanks! xxx

[1faghag]

I was doing good then I read this:

"Still visibly confused, the boy softly touched the yellowish neck and then the pony looked up at the human next to her. Her lips vibrated and let out a mixture of whinnying and snorting. It was an awkward sound, almost like she talked."

& I cried my heart out. Don't know why but OMG!!! The emotions you are making feel are all over the place. I LOVE, LOVE this family!!!!!!!! I've never been around horses being a city girl, but Danny's reaction was so true to life. I cried. Well done!!!!

[sylnl]

*blushing again* thank you so much for all the love!

[ltklo]

Reading this again, I really love how you describe all of Danny's actions and emotions.

[sylnl]

Thanks xxx