163 Intrusion

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Comments

[kccalgal]

Go Zoe! She found her voice defending her brother. I can't wait for part 2 tomorrow.

[sylnl]

I'm glad you liked!!! xxx thanks!

[sleeper6]

Poor Danny! I know we all know what he's been through but every time he talks about it, it becomes real again and it's horrible. Hopefully this will be it once he says the whole truth so he never has to talk about it again.

And I hope Zoe continues to talk; Danny and her need each other to get through what they've been through. So happy they have Luke and Reid on their team as well.

Great chapter.

[sylnl]

Thanks. Yeah, I know what you mean about Danny. I'm hoping this whole court thing will give some closure. It's hard to write.

[scotianova]

It's almost impossible to comment today. So I try to concentrate on the good that happens to Danny and Zoe - this picture reminds me of Luke - Reid's surely not far:)))
http://cantinhodoceu.org.br/media/accordion/cantinho-project-school-class01.jpg

[sylnl]

Yeah, their Daddies are there! Thanks for the great picture! <3

[nancygrew]

fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed seeing the story from Emily's POV. I actually really loved Emily and Hal together. Of course, I loved Hal with everyone except Carly. emotional way to get Zoe to speak!

[sylnl]

Thanks! Yeah, Hal... what a loss that was. I loved Ben. So sad he needed this exit.

[ltklo]

I like how you describe Danny during his testimony, and the photo that you made.

Interesting how many people commented on getting this from Emily's POV. I didn't ascribe it that much significance when I first read it but I now realize how clever it was.

[sylnl]

Hehehehe, thanks! To me it was a way to step back from the story a little. I'm glad it worked out so well.