The Hospital

[sylva_anggia]

THE HOSPITAL

Author : sylva_anggia
Pairing : Brian/Zack
Rating : NC-17
Summary : "Only to care the disease, not to care the sick. The University Hospital made many doctors of this sort."
Disclaimer : Nothing in this story was related to the real person, profession, and or organization portrayed herein

Comments

[blueslashicons]

Yay, you posted it! *happy dance* I really love your story, it has such an exciting plot to it, and I really have to give you kudos on its unraveling.

Brian's attitude is so spot-on for his character, I burst out laughing at his scratching his crotch while talking to Matt, and his "fuck may care" demeanor paints such a perfect picture of him. :D

Zacky *squishes him* is so perfectly attitude-ish, too, and throughout his dialoge and banter, I can "hear" his amusement and *see* his love for Brian, yes, even Brian's love for Zacky shows through. :D

Matt *lol* he doesn't know whether to be repulsed by Brian or not since he obviously knows Brian's a genius, albeit with his hobo crotch-crabs ickyness to him.

I am so looking forward to reading more, you've grabbed my attention and I find myself thinking of your story often. If you decide that you would want a beta, I offer you my services, though not having one takes nothing away from your awesome story.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter,

May :D

[sylva_anggia]

Awh, you're too nice to me. Thanks. I'm so glad that you like this version as well. I just thought that the previous one was just too much talking and less action *shrugs*.

About brian and his crotch ickyness, it was inspired by an old video where brian was sitting on couch, doing an interview only with his boxer shorts and shocks and a fedora. It was funny as well weird and disturbing, but it was brian, so all was forgiven :P

And as for an update, I'll try updating it weekly, but don't hold me to it :D

Thanks again,
Syl

[blueslashicons]

I do love this version as well, though I do miss how you began the other one with them in bed, and horny Zacky not getting enough Brian, though I surely can't blame him. ;p

I really enjoy dialogs since they bring the characters to life, though we do need ambiance and descriptions of said characters and the story's environment to complete the mental picture. Your story does both wonderfully.

I would so love to see that vid! If you find it, please send me the link. :D

I'll be watching for your updates, and no, I won't put you on a clock. :D

Your welcome,
May

[sylva_anggia]

Hey, I just found the link for the video, here you go:

a7x interview

it's pretty dark and not so easy for the eyes to see, and I can't help quoting from someone who commented on this: "Syn could be jacking off and no one could tell because of this fucked up lighting." :D

[disaster_dani]

awesome more i need more !!!! :P

[sylva_anggia]

more is coming =)
thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it ^^

[sevenfoldbaby]

Really good, can't wait to read more

[sylva_anggia]

thanks, more is coming =)